Writing Feedback / my first motorcycle ride [4]

"how am i supposed to stay on?" was my first question when i couldn't reach my legs to balance the bike."all you have to do is initially try to balance and start and then you can fly like a bird" said dad and uncle putting their encouraging words.mom was perplexed worrying that the bike might fall and i might hurt my leg,i gave her the confidence that i wont fall but i could see cars and other vehicles in my road.me,dad and uncle headed to a nearby ground but it was filled with guys playing cricket,all three of us dint want those eyes on me.so we headed ahead and saw a calm gravel road ahead."this is it!" i exclaimed with excitement thinking of my very first ride on the geared guy.initially uncle showed how he rides and he handed me the keys, keys in,kick start without holding clutch and break,green light on the indicator display showing that the gears aren't engaged,hold the clutch,engage the gear,release the clutch and acceleration together slowly...and wroooooooooooooooooooommmmmm!! i was seated on the bike over the gravel street and RIDING all by myself,could see pride on dads' face,happiness on uncles' face.

worried about the bike,leg mom was in a state of restlessness when she opened the door,to show her my first initial step i rode it,this time on my road filled with cars and other vehicles!!

i want some one to help me out with the grammatical mistakes and other mistakes in the essay