vijaythot
Aug 16, 2012
Writing Feedback / Around 40% of people are studying because of their interest in subject and to gain qualification [4]
this is my first thread sir/madam kindly make the necessary suggestions. thanks in advance
The bar chart illustrates various reasons for adults education and the pie chart reveals the opinion of various people about the sharing cost of adult education.
From the bar graph it is clear that approximately around 40 percent of people are studying because of their intreast in subject and to gain qualification. 22 percent of people study, as it is helpful for their current job. the reason for improving prospects of promotion and study for enjoyment is of 20 percent each, while a minor proportion (12% and 9%) believe that their study can able to change their jobs and to meet new people
There are three ways people think that the education cost should be shared. The majority of people (40%) think individual should bear the cost of their education on the other hand they believe that tax payers and employers should share the education cost to about 25%and 35% respectively
( 151 words )
this is my first thread sir/madam kindly make the necessary suggestions. thanks in advance
The bar chart illustrates various reasons for adults education and the pie chart reveals the opinion of various people about the sharing cost of adult education.
From the bar graph it is clear that approximately around 40 percent of people are studying because of their intreast in subject and to gain qualification. 22 percent of people study, as it is helpful for their current job. the reason for improving prospects of promotion and study for enjoyment is of 20 percent each, while a minor proportion (12% and 9%) believe that their study can able to change their jobs and to meet new people
There are three ways people think that the education cost should be shared. The majority of people (40%) think individual should bear the cost of their education on the other hand they believe that tax payers and employers should share the education cost to about 25%and 35% respectively
( 151 words )
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