Writing Feedback / 'comparison the sales of CD' - Bar chart of IELTS task-1 [3]

The Bar chart shows the striking changes in the sales of games software, CD's and DVDs in the whole world between the years 2001 and 2003.

There is a gradual rise in the games software in 4 years from 10 billion dollars in 2000 to 19 billion dollars in 2003.It means sales rose to 9 billion dollars from 2000 to 2003.When comes to DVDs there is a drastic rise in the sales globally between the years 2000 and 2003, it boomed from 18 billion dollars to 31 billion dollars but there is just a slight decrease in overall sales of CD's globally from year 2000 to 2003 that is about 1 billion dollars from 2000 to 2001 and it stayed unchanged till 2003

Of overall, comparison the sales of CD's are noted as highest and sales of games software's noted as least globally in all the years.

In conclusion, the sales of games software's and DVDs are increasing gradually and sales of CD's decreased slightly.

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