Poetry / It drives me mad. This is my second poem. "What If life" [9]

wow nice poem! keep it up!

Undergraduate / Most significant academic experience - "interviewing the mayor in your house" [2]

i beleive you should go into more detail on how these changes occured. Also, i think you should take out the "i can change the world", I think it sounds better ending with..

" ...how insignificant it may seem, one man can make an impact."

maybe end it like ".... how insignificant it may seem, one man can make an impact. One man, can change the world."

something like that. It also seems extremely short, is there a a minimum/maximum word count?