Undergraduate / "All they wanted was a better life for you" ; The Dream, the Seed, and the Fruits. [7]

Great Essay! Your opening is really captivating but I also believe the last paragraph is a little bit detached.
I'm from China too and I can truly sense your feelings with this story.
However, don't you think this essay is more about your meaningful experience of life transition rather than the influence your parents had imposed on you?

Maybe you should consider recategorizing it.