falishaa
Dec 9, 2012
Scholarship / I remember that my mom has worked so hard: Personal Statement [8]
I live with my mom, dad, and my sister. My mom works at Chevron, while my dad is an unemployee. She all alone pays house installment and supports the whole family needs. She once told me, that half of her monthly salary is used to pay off the house installment, so she might can not afford to pay for my living cost in university, but she keep working to fulfill the cost. She really is a hardworking woman , and that is what she always taught me to become.
This condition in my family, actually had formed me into the way I am now, which is a hardworker, optimistic, thankful, and not easily give up person. Whenever I get difficulty in something, I remembered that my mom has worked so hard, so I trust myself that I can follow her as an example and I will not let obstacles overcome myself, and I am being thankful for all the things I have despite the money matters my family are having. Eventhough I have to collect money my own money to buy shoes and clothes, I am enjoying that because it shapes me to become an independent individual.
Also, teenagers in my age tend to spent their time shopping and partying, which I can not afford. So, I prefer to spent most of my time in school's community, such as joining band club as guitar player, and soccer club as defender player and being a secretary in its organizations. I also spent my time participated in several events as a committee, and also winning Science Olympic in regency level. Not only this activities are more meaningful, but here I have developed leadership skills and have learned to interact with a wide variety of people while working with different deskjobs.
essay for educational assistance program (fund scholarship)
please correct my essay. max 300 words thankyou so much
I live with my mom, dad, and my sister. My mom works at Chevron, while my dad is an unemployee. She all alone pays house installment and supports the whole family needs. She once told me, that half of her monthly salary is used to pay off the house installment, so she might can not afford to pay for my living cost in university, but she keep working to fulfill the cost. She really is a hardworking woman , and that is what she always taught me to become.
This condition in my family, actually had formed me into the way I am now, which is a hardworker, optimistic, thankful, and not easily give up person. Whenever I get difficulty in something, I remembered that my mom has worked so hard, so I trust myself that I can follow her as an example and I will not let obstacles overcome myself, and I am being thankful for all the things I have despite the money matters my family are having. Eventhough I have to collect money my own money to buy shoes and clothes, I am enjoying that because it shapes me to become an independent individual.
Also, teenagers in my age tend to spent their time shopping and partying, which I can not afford. So, I prefer to spent most of my time in school's community, such as joining band club as guitar player, and soccer club as defender player and being a secretary in its organizations. I also spent my time participated in several events as a committee, and also winning Science Olympic in regency level. Not only this activities are more meaningful, but here I have developed leadership skills and have learned to interact with a wide variety of people while working with different deskjobs.
essay for educational assistance program (fund scholarship)
please correct my essay. max 300 words thankyou so much