Writing Feedback / Universities and high schools should teach students specific careers [3]

Dear Pahan/ Jinq1212,
I believe that the essay should be constructed in such away: Introduction - Essay body part one (For) - Essay body part 2 (Against) - Conclusion.

So, by display one side of opinion would cost you marks. Therefore, it is better and remarkable to go ahead with the option that I shown.

Hope my comment is correct and helpful.

Regards.
Oceanscape78