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Jan 31, 2013
Undergraduate / My home, My community (Michigan Essay) [4]

Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. (Approximately 250 words)

"And I think to myself what a wonderful world..." these few words from the lyrics of a song by Louis Armstrong that come to my mind when I look at what man has come to achieve, when I look at everything around me. I am inspired by the machines, which surround me starting from a basic screwdriver. My passion for these beautiful machines is what motivates me to give back to the world and to create devices more spectacular and wondrous.

I come from a close-knit Indian family where any decision taken is first elaborately discussed and then decided upon. Whether I should go abroad was one such decision, the high tuition fee, the university I am going to be studying in and what kind of education I would receive. My father initially was hesitant with the idea of me studying abroad but soon he realised that I need more practical learning because of my inquisitive nature. My parents and grandparents have always taken this matter very seriously and supported me. They have given me their consent to pursue my dreams in an unknown land even when they are terrified, so that I could receive great education.

It is because of this love, passion and enthusiasm for these awe-inspiring creations of many great men before me, and the support from my family that I want to become an engineer. From a simple pen to the most complex machine, life without these just don't seem to be possible and the eagerness to create more of these mind-boggling machines is the dream that keeps me awake at night.
sanket_c   
Feb 1, 2013
Undergraduate / CHESS PLAYER; U MICH COMMON APP; Community I belong [4]

I am an enthusiastic chess player, which involves is a sport that is not very popular -especially among girls. Aside from my home, the place where I feel most at welcome is my local city chess club. At first, my mom was worried with about me, constantly in the company of mensurrounded by men , but her mind eased when she saw how easily they accepted memuch at home i was with them. I think our success as a competitive club has to do with the fact that we support and help each other in every way we can. We treat each other with respect and tolerance. As any other normal family, we sometimes have our differences, nonetheless, we are able to talk through them as well as agree on a solution.

Some of us have had the delightful experience of competing in international tournaments, representing our Island and traveling to different countries, meeting new people and cultures. Just recently, I went alongwas part of a group of twelve other young chess players to compete for the first time in the World Youth Chess Championship in Maribor, Slovenia. As there wereoldestolder and more experienced players , amid my delegation, I was unintentionally given the role of an advocate and a supporter. I encouraged my teammates to always give their best and not feel beaten up if they lost because those were the games of which we learned the most. As U.S. Chess National Master and author Dan Heisman says, "Don't be afraid of losing; be afraid of playing a game and not learning something."

Great story but u have to work on the English. I tried correcting but please get it seen from an English Educator.

And please go through my essay too.
sanket_c   
Feb 1, 2013
Undergraduate / My home, My community (Michigan Essay) [4]

Thank You Dumi but is this essay apt for the topic... I have written this but i am not sure about its appropriateness !!
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