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Dec 31, 2012
Essays / how do I start writing my essay on noisy and silent art, opening sentence? [4]

Iintroductory sentence for an English composition.

Often when asked about the extracurricular activities that I am a part of at school, the reactions that I receive from my peers when I mention the word, "math club" have been quite interesting.

This sentence to me, sounds a little awkward.
Is there another way to write this introductory sentence so it sounds catchy and attention-grabbing?
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