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Jan 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / PORT DICKSON; School holiday exprience [5]

Last month,I went to Port Dicksonwith my family.We had picnic at Teluk Kemang.Teluk Kemang is about 12 kilometers from Port Dickson.My father drove us there in his car.

We arrived there at 10:00 a.m.My family and I managed to get a place in the shade of a large tree and we put our things there.the water cool and refreshing and I loved splashing it on my little brother.however,the hot sun above can be quite uncomfortable.

Soon we heard my mom calling us to have lunch.My little brother and me ran to her and helped ourselves to the delicious curry she had bought.Then we had several glasses of ice-cold drink.

After lunch,we played a while more in the sea.We walked over to one of the hotels nearby and washed ourselves with clean freshwater.

When we returned,my mother packed everthing in the car.So,all of us got into the car and my father drove us back home to Klang,Selangor.
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