Undergraduate / 5 paragraph essay form about my career goals [4]

Okay the first three paragraphs are answering the question "What are your career goals and how do you expect your education at the Art Institute of Seattle to help you attain them?" (must be between 2-3 paragraphs). And the final one is what I'm having the most trouble with which is "In what ways will you participate and commit to your education in order to be successful?" (1-2 paragraphs). I know it's not great, 'tis why I'm in need of help... so here's what I've been able to conjure up at the moment:

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My career goals are to attain a career where I can express my artistic talent and passion for art as well as open my mind in ways that I could never do at any other career. To obtain these goals, I must set a track. After looking to many other vantage points resulting in faint success, such as considering the army, attempting to obtain a job at Boeing, and looking into various other art collages, to name a few, I have found that the Art Institute of Seattle has just the programs I'm looking for and just what I need to be successful at my goals.

It has been a life long dream of mine to put my imagination, with my world and characters, into life like animation in such ways as video gaming with three dimensional modeling as well as flash animation with thrilling story-lines that appeal not just to myself, but to other viewers. My portfolio reflects much of my ideas and that of which I am passionate about. The Art Institute of Seattle offers just the right animation programs I need to obtain these goals. Everything from simple flash animation to advanced three dimensional modeling in an interactive digital world.

With this experience, I can gain a career I'll love for the rest of my life. I would be eligible to work at popular gaming and animation companies such as Blizzard, EA Games, and Forgotten Realms, in which I have been a fan of for many years, using skills learned from the Art Institute of Seattle. These skills being two dimensional and three dimensional animation and techniques, story boarding, scripting, and rendering.

I am very strong and passionate about art and how I want to excel it. Therefore, I am strongly willing to participate in what ever programs and activities which are needed to complete my goals in this institute. I am very committed to fulfilling my goals and as so, I will push myself in all ways to succeed and graduate so that I may fulfill my creative dream and to be a proud employee at a large computer gaming and animation industry.

Scholarship / the Art Institute of Seattle, Scholarship essay statement? [4]

Erm... Ignore that one, I made some quick alterations....
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As an extra-imaginative artist, my objectives have always been to improve my skills in what I love most. Therefore, my careers of choosing would be something in the art industry working with my talents in fields such as media arts, graphic design, but mostly animation. I have always wanted to bring my imagination to life in the digital world of animation. Inspirations to this have been animation by Disney, Blizzard, Pixar, etc.

I would like very much to pursue my artistic calling, and a scholarship would really be helpful to me in doing so. I have already acquired the artistic needs to pursue my dreams and be accepted into the Art Institute of Seattle, but I have not acquired the financial needs. Therefore, I am in much need of this scholarship in order to start college and improve my skills in drawing, digital illustration, and various other techniques relating to art in order to be eligible for a career that will forever suit me.

I've taken many art courses throughout my years in middle school and high school, to improve my skills in drawing using a variety of different media such as pencils, colored pencils, prints, paint, etc., as well as a college credit course in my senior year for 2d Portfolio. I've also worked with digital art programs such as Photoshop and Flash to create more appealing illustrations and to work with animation. Most of my work is based around the human figure, also focusing on lighting and shadowing based on position and proportioning. I have also worked with photo manipulation using contrast and altering hues to name a few. There is nothing I won't try to go further with this skill. Art is and has always been my biggest fascination.