Undergraduate / Style of Studying; MPACT of my personal weakness on PA program [5]

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Undergraduate / Style of Studying; MPACT of my personal weakness on PA program [5]

Throughout my medical study, the target of achieving high grades at the final exam drove me. This demanded me to employ a more studious approach sacrificing many other personal interests. Sometime, that approach caused severe study pressure and stress to me. However, by doing so, I now I feel I have missed many enjoyable moments during my school life. This was my weakness and I have worked to improve it. I had to change my personal attitude at the most stressful situations. For me, the distinct point was when I figured that my future is so important to plan for, but not to be obsessed to the extent that I neglect my present. In addition, undertaking the hard way and being too hard with myself, was so demanding and it did not bring about my expectations. By time and persistence, I returned to my usual activity and hobbies for example spiritual activities, reading romantic novels. Although, the time space for those activities became very narrow than before, I was enjoying it. One of the achievements, which I am proud of, was Planning 'First aid and CPR program 'and coaching youth in my scout team. I have enjoyed doing transfer my knowledge to them. Totally, I became convinced that finding the pleasure, in each step toward achieving my goals, it would be for my advantage and it has a magic power in alleviating the toughness of each step. Doing those added a mint flavor to life and did add to my personality besides I got an upswing in my grades for the clinical years of study. To be more consistent, well it is a working progress and I still face challenging times, but still I have to enjoy the journey even before reaching my milestone. Considering that, there is usually another milestone to chase. I have learned to keep chasing my goals without neglecting the intimate moments of our short life. With this rationality, I perceive my future. Intensively I wish to be enrolled in PA program. I will commit to my study, but I will never ignore my personal life. I cannot wait to review and add to my medical knowledge .I feel myself thrilled to get the opportunity that would be the modified base for my future professionalism.