Undergraduate / My strong abilities; Kelley School of business Admission Essay [6]

This is my admission essay to the Kelley school of business. I have done my best to take out all the grammatical errors but please if anyone can give comments and feed back on the essay it would be very helpful

Main requirements for the paper is: What are you strong attributes? and what can you learn from the Kelley school of business.
Thanks in advance.
I was trying to upload it i am new to the site so sorry if i make any mistakes on uploading the essay.