Essays / From Kyrgyzstan to Oxford [23]

Thank you All for your quick response:):)

Right now I am very busy, but trying to do my best.

Could you advise me where to apply for MBA. I am third year student at Kyrgyz Economical University.

I will go through all your questions and find out everything I can.

Thank you :)

Essays / From Kyrgyzstan to Oxford [23]

here is my Essay for Oxford. Could you please help me to make it better!!

Thank you very much in advance!! :)

Essays / From Kyrgyzstan to Oxford [23]

Dear Kevin,

you really inspired me. Thank you very much!! I start believe in myself.

BEst regards!! :)

Essays / From Kyrgyzstan to Oxford [23]

Dear Friends!!!!!!

I have already done my essay!!! Could you please help me with it, make it stronger so that I will do MBA at the University of Oxford

THANK YOU VERY MUCHHH ;)

Essays / From Kyrgyzstan to Oxford [23]

DEAR FRIENDS,!!!!!!!!!!!

thank you VERY MUCH for all your help and support!!

I made some changes to my previous essay, could you please check it out.

I would be happy to hear from you soon!!!!!!

Essays / From Kyrgyzstan to Oxford [23]

Master at the University of Oxford

Dear All, I need your help to improve my essay so that I can make my dream come true!!

Thank you very much !!

Essays / From Kyrgyzstan to Oxford [23]

I have made little corrections :)

By the way could you please tell me, how I did it? :)

Thank you very much

Statement of purpose
Tursunbek Japarov

Kyrgyzstan is in dire need of political reforms and the good President. I am an emerging leader, someone who hopes to start a new party and one day gain the presidency, someone with many of the skills and characteristics necessary for such an achievement, but not yet someone who has done more than win student-level awards and elections.

Leading people is my talent. During my school years, I dedicated most of my time to the student organization "Moving Forward", editing our monthly student newspaper and building its website. Nowadays I advise the President of this student body on all organizational and multimedia questions. Our biggest achievement has been to put together the university referendum and bring on a new university constitution. As someone in charge of media I work with the US embassy in implementing our mission to make every student academically honest. Every summer the Kyrgyz press, professors and students from many universities participated in our trainings and conferences. Such initiative activities started when I was studying at school. Together with teachers and schoolmates we organized concerts, debates and interactive games. Communicating with each other we had fun and learned to be positive. Teacher staff chose me to participate in interactive show on national channel because I had excellent knowledge of Geography and History of Kyrgyzstan.

Best of the best students of all Kyrgyzstan came to the international scientific student conference at International University of Kyrgyzstan in 2007. I was one of them reporting about "Developing Kyrgyzstan economy". My critical skills helped me to answer all questions from the committee and the smartest students. I came up with solutions to local problems of Kyrgyzstan using my very good analytical skills. In the end of conference everyone had a chance to vote and leave comments. Most students liked my charisma and self-confidence. I made them believe that changes in Kyrgyzstan are achievable. Finally I won the Diploma of the 1st degree and my report was chosen to be published.

Many children dreamed of becoming a cosmonaut or a president. I wished to study at the University of Oxford and become the President of Kyrgyzstan. The University of Oxford was known even in the villages of Kyrgyzstan. I still remember my first English book was very big with an inscription capital letters "the Oxford Press". For ages the University of Oxford has been the best place to attain education and advantageous knowledge. Nowadays it is one of the best universities around the whole planet. Every year the University of Oxford is educating consistent, visible and challenging leaders from many countries with different cultures changing lives, organizations and the World for better. It is challenging because everyone with willingness can come up with any idea to any faculty. At the University of Oxford you do what you can do well that is why the World always has new progresses and inventions made by the University of Oxford. I strongly believe that atmosphere of creation would give me inspiration and incomparable education to improve my thesis and paper works. In today's business environment, a successful finance professional must possess not only a high standard of technical knowledge, but also an entrepreneurial flair and in-depth understanding of strategies for corporate development.

After completing the masters program, I would like to continue my education and obtain a Ph.D. in Economics. This degree would enable me to link academic career with policy practice, i.e. I plan on working with tax policy and social issues in the Ministry of Economy and Finance of Kyrgyzstan. I believe the University of Oxford will be eager to be part of the process by helping to educate an emerging leader such as me.