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Posts by amie
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Last Post: Mar 29, 2009
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amie   
Mar 19, 2009
Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

please help me to correct my poem,, I don't know how to write senses poem, and this is my first poem..

feeling doubt

it is gray,
as the cloud when it will rain
sounding like a bunch of nonsense
it is fancy,
as a spicy food
smelling like sulfuric acid
it is shapeless
as the earth we walk on
felling doubt of you drives me insane

please correct the word if i have made some mistakes and reply it as soon as possible.
thank you for reading my message,,
amie   
Mar 19, 2009
Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

thank you.

i think you have same opinion as me,, but i don't know how to write the word of food that has many taste so we can't feel the taste anymore,,and what should i call it in english?

i am a beginner in english,,

please help me..because i have to submit it now or saturday ( the latest time to submit it).
thank you so much for helping me..
amie   
Mar 20, 2009
Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

it is fancy,
burns like a spicy meal
upsetting the system and preventing all rest
it's smell like sulfuric acid
...your nose
it is shapeless,
as the earth we walk on
feeling doubt about you drives me insane

i don't know the word that i have to put after it's smell like sulfuric acid,,
would you like to add it?
is it better???

thank you so much..
amie   
Mar 20, 2009
Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

owh,, i will write the first few lines..calm down..yes,,I study english as my second language. I'm an Indonesian.
Thank you so much for both of you,,i think my poem is getting better than before.

I'll write it down again:

" feeling doubt"

it is gray,
as the cloud when it will rain
sounding like a bunch of nonsense
it is fancy,
burns like a spicy meal
upsetting the system and preventing all rest
it's smell like sulfuric acid
dulling the senses
it is shapeless,
as the earth we walk on
feeling doubt about you drives me insane

well, may I ask a question?
I don't know the meaning of "assailing". I've tried to find it in my dictionary but there's not the word in it.

thank you so much.
amie   
Mar 23, 2009
Book Reports / Scout's understanding of Atticus' life - To Kill A Mockingbird -- grade 10 essay [5]

from the events she experienced and the people she met.

Scout discovered various sources of influence that ultimately lead her in understanding her father's words of understanding other people.

Scout's experience in school has helped her to understand other people better by considering their opinions. For example, when Miss Caroline offered Walter Cunningham a quarter but Walter wouldn't accept it. Scout then informed Miss Caroline that he's a Cunningham and Cunningham's never took anything that they can't pay back. Scout knew Miss Caroline didn't know that since she was unfamiliar with the town and thought about her view.
amie   
Mar 27, 2009
Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

hi..

I've written a poem. I want to put this poem in my own zine..the topic of my zine is about environment..please correct my poem, i believe that i have made some mistakes in making this poem..

save my life

a single leaf's falling
swung by the wind
looking for a better place
not knowing where it goes
tree is not safe anymore
branch seems bad
lacking of water
because of water
" what should I do now?"
a simple question
but, do you understand it?

thank you so much....
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