amie
Mar 19, 2009
Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]
please help me to correct my poem,, I don't know how to write senses poem, and this is my first poem..
feeling doubt
it is gray,
as the cloud when it will rain
sounding like a bunch of nonsense
it is fancy,
as a spicy food
smelling like sulfuric acid
it is shapeless
as the earth we walk on
felling doubt of you drives me insane
please correct the word if i have made some mistakes and reply it as soon as possible.
thank you for reading my message,,
please help me to correct my poem,, I don't know how to write senses poem, and this is my first poem..
feeling doubt
it is gray,
as the cloud when it will rain
sounding like a bunch of nonsense
it is fancy,
as a spicy food
smelling like sulfuric acid
it is shapeless
as the earth we walk on
felling doubt of you drives me insane
please correct the word if i have made some mistakes and reply it as soon as possible.
thank you for reading my message,,