Writing Feedback / City vs countryside (essay by 8th grader in Norway) [3]

Based on what you written, my experience is living in a modern city. Living in a city simply make it easy for me to get around. Education qualification is better than those in the countryside. In conclusion, i would just agreed with you on living the best in the city.

Writing Feedback / Minimum Legal Drinking Age 21 & why it should stay there [3]

Your statement currently give a positive minded thinking, i would say it is true we need to stick to the law given by the government. Therefore i would agree with your thinking. Soon as you state this statement my heart felt for it and it is very important that we need to contribute to the government law.