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Posts by Thalium
Joined: Jun 6, 2013
Last Post: Jun 7, 2013
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Thalium   
Jun 6, 2013
Scholarship / 'following through with hard work' - why do you deserve this sponsorship? [4]

There is small box on a sponsorship application form,where i need to fill in a paragraph stating why i deserve a sponsorship.

The paragraph is as
follows.
I deserve this sponsorship,because i have the ability to follow through with all the hard work it will take to achieve my dreams and goals.I trust in myself and i believe,this sponsorship wil be the foundation i need to build a better me,and enable me to become an inspiration to others through my academic success.
Thalium   
Jun 7, 2013
Scholarship / 'following through with hard work' - why do you deserve this sponsorship? [4]

Here are some of my corrections.

I am worthy of this tuition, and maintainance sponsorship because i will work hard and do whatever it takes to achieve my goal of furthuring my studies,and a life long dream of impacting change in my country,through academic excellence.I trust in myself and believe that this sponsorship will be the foundation i need to pursue my vision and abition.Therefore,this scholarship will enable to become an inspirations for others through my educational success.
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