mopoohaddict
Aug 28, 2013
Undergraduate / It is a common expression that life is a journey; TAMU TRANSFER PAPER [3]
I think is awesome that even with autism you are striving for excellence. First and foremost I noticed a lot of grammatical errors. Ensure that you are proof reading carefully. I also feel that there should be more inclusion on the reasons why you feel that a human resource field is the right field for you, not that you are qualified as of yet. For example how can you impact the associates you would work for. Human resource is a tough field, think about what qualities you possess and the qualities you hope to learn from A&M. By meshing them together you will have the answer to how you can help your associates. What does A&M offer that interest you specifically academically? How would you use it? Ensure that each paragraph is about one topic. Limit your opinions of the schools reputation and focus on your desire to attend a school that is going to get you where you want to go academically. You can mention that it has been a life long dream with out making it sound like you are desperate. Good luck and I look forward to seeing a revised version.
I think is awesome that even with autism you are striving for excellence. First and foremost I noticed a lot of grammatical errors. Ensure that you are proof reading carefully. I also feel that there should be more inclusion on the reasons why you feel that a human resource field is the right field for you, not that you are qualified as of yet. For example how can you impact the associates you would work for. Human resource is a tough field, think about what qualities you possess and the qualities you hope to learn from A&M. By meshing them together you will have the answer to how you can help your associates. What does A&M offer that interest you specifically academically? How would you use it? Ensure that each paragraph is about one topic. Limit your opinions of the schools reputation and focus on your desire to attend a school that is going to get you where you want to go academically. You can mention that it has been a life long dream with out making it sound like you are desperate. Good luck and I look forward to seeing a revised version.