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Posts by benzgarrison
Name: Ben Garrison
Joined: Oct 9, 2013
Last Post: Oct 11, 2013
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From: United States of America
School: River Hill High

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benzgarrison   
Oct 9, 2013
Undergraduate / WATER SKIING; Florida State University; "Characteristic appealing to me" [3]

prompt: Florida State University is more than just a world-class academic institution preparing you for a future career. We are a caring community of well-rounded individuals who embrace leadership, learning, service, and global awareness. With this in mind, which of these characteristics appeal most to you, and why?

There is nothing else quite like it. Popping off the boat's two-foot wake, sending my body 5 feet into the air. With a smooth landing, I successfully completed a wake-to-wake jump. Learning is the characteristic that appeals to me most. Learning new tricks in one of my favorite sports, wakeboarding, new subjects in school, and learning about the living situations of those less fortunate, helped me understand the success of hard work, and gratitude from those I have serviced.

A strong foundation in water-skiing contributed to my immediate success getting up on a wakeboard. However, staying up is a completely different thing. Learning to maintain balance on the ever-changing water surface took dozens of painful falls, headaches, and jellyfish stings. Remaining vigilant through my first season, I learned to move in and out of the wake comfortably. After wrapping up my third season, my skills have greatly increased, and the sport has become my favorite summer past time. Learning to wakeboard has been incredibly rewarding because I get to share the experience with my family and friends every time we go on the water.

This year I am taking Accounting as an elective. My initial expectations were like other classes, memorizing vocabulary and methods of solving problems. However, Accounting is much more than this. Memorized material from previous years in math and English have contributed to learning the basics in this new discipline. I'm starting to picture myself in a career as a certified public accountant. After researching Florida State's exemplary business and accounting programs, a degree from this world-class institute will offer me a plethora of job opportunities in the business world, and the greatest possibility for a successful career.

One Saturday my sophomore year, a friend asked if I wanted to volunteer at a homeless shelter in our community. I had no idea we had a shelter or even homeless people living in our county. The next morning we drove to the shelter. Unsure of what to expect, I got out of the car and was greeted by a resident at the door. I was handed four cartons of eggs to crack. We made a delicious brunch, an began serving. I thought we made way too much food when I looked down at our serving station, but as the families and individuals kept lining up, I was wrong. Learning about the living situations of these people inspired me to stick with the service. For the past years, I have gone back once a month.

Learning to wakeboard has not only given me self-satisfaction, but has aloud me to share the experience with my friends and family. Accounting is currently giving my previous years in math and English purpose, as I am able to piece together various aspects and learn accounting. Volunteering at the homeless shelter opened my eyes to how some people in my community live. This inspired me to continue to service them, and I am humbled by how grateful they are.
benzgarrison   
Oct 11, 2013
Undergraduate / I have enjoyed reading Frankenstein by Mary Shelly - Short Answer Crisis! [4]

This is a quality answer. You highlighted a book you enjoyed, and related it to a omnipresent concept of having relationships. However, I'm not entirely sure that you should say "This book taught me that we need a relationship with someone in our lives." This seems like you had no idea person to person relationships were important before you read the book. You can say that this book reiterated the need for relationships in our lives or it reenforced the need for relationships. Other than that minor technicality this is strong, good luck with Columbia.
benzgarrison   
Oct 11, 2013
Undergraduate / As an accountant I work with diverse people; North Carolina State: Diversity [3]

Prompt: NC State is a community that is strong because of the diversity of our perspectives and experiences. Please describe how you could contribute to or benefit from campus diversity. (500 Characters)

As an accountant, I will be working with people from different backgrounds, experiences, and cultures. Attending a school among the highest rankings in diversity will allow me to network. Setting up and maintaining relationships with the people I would meet, will give me an edge in the growing competitive business marketplace. The strong relationships I will develop will open the door to many possible job opportunities that other schools less diverse than NC State cannot.
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