Writing Feedback / IELTS essay about professional workers ,sports and entertainment personalities [3]

Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The economy growth benefit from the professional workers and some other industries developing. Different areas have their own contributes to the society.About this, some people think that should be focus on the sport and entertainment personality;while others suggest that professional workers play an essential role and have more contribution than sports and entertainment personality.However,I agree with the latter points.

There is no doubt that professional workers are the main group in society and work in the different kinds of field such as science、medicine、finance、accounting. And professional workers make an effort to the economy growth.For example,the scientist who have the professional knowledge and skills and work in the product industry. They can use their professional skills to improve the high-tech and the productivity.Finally,it can help the economy growth.

Besides,the professional workers such as the doctor,the engineer, the teacher and so on, they have their own value in their working fields.Because of these peoples,that the society becomes more develop and makes the world wonderful. So the value of the professional workers should not be ignore.Giving them high salary is a good trend.

However,it is obvious that more talent celebrities come out ,such as the movie star,the pop singer,the fashion model,etc. They maybe have the influence on the public and have some meaningful program. But compared with the professional workers, they just doing a little on value things and these things are simply on their art fields. For instance, a famous pop singer maybe have the talent on singing and have the magic voice to attract the people's eyes, but it also maybe have the negative effect on some people,especially for teenagers who are addicted this and study badly. So this kind of people who worked in this field don't have too much contribution to the society.

In conclusion, the professional workers have more responsibilities to boost the economy and develop the society. At the long-term, they play the pivotal role on the social contribution. So they should be paid more attention than the sport and entertainment personality.

Writing Feedback / IELTS essay about pay tax to the state or not [3]

Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is obvious that almost all the government around the world are take the taxes form people.Some citizens argue that individuals should stop pay the taxes to the government;while others think that citizens have the responsibility to pay the tax.For me,I agree with the latter points.

Some people suggest that they would be rather to saving their own money,and they do not want to take taxes. And there are some reasons. Some governments use the tax to some wrong places and finally waste it on the useless area.Also, the authority and the official apartment and even some selfish officers maybe have chance to use these taxes and become their own property.On the other hand,the taxation system also brings the negative effect on citizens.For example,some people just have the low salaries and living with the base subsistence level,and they do not have too much wages to pay the tax.

However,paying the tax to the state is the inevitable choice.Because the country need the funds to keep developing. For instance, governments must use these part of money to built

the public facilities,such as,schools,hospital,medical center,etc. Also,the country must built there own military to protect themselves, and it must use the funds which form the taxes.And the country's taxes are usually use to the science and technology development and the personnel training.

In the long term, there is no doubt that paying the taxes have benefits to the citizens. Because of the taxation, governments have the ability to construct or built all kinds of service organizations and can have chance to adjust the social welfare to the poor people and let them have more rights and a good living standard. With these money,the public service can help a lot of things, For example,more schools would be come out and more children can get the better education than before.

In conclusion,I think it is good measures that people have the responsibility to pay the taxes. And it can benefits to the development of country, and it is not only good for the economy growth but also good for the individuals.