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Posts by Ravi Vj
Name: Ravi Prakash Vijay
Joined: Nov 24, 2013
Last Post: Nov 27, 2013
Threads: 2
Posts: 5  
From: India
School: Stt.Thomas english school

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Ravi Vj   
Nov 24, 2013
Writing Feedback / 'Why don't we use laughing gas in wars?' [3]

War? Why ...
God made the country and man made the town! Isn't it true?
The world has changed drastically after the entry of man in the scene.He has changed almost everything that came to range.After all he proved to be the greatest and most smartest of all the walking creatures.Love,Hate,Greed all were his qualities.These led to the start of 'snatching' business,a new phenomenon in the society.Greed was after all a driving factor behind it.So war became his trend.War for his country,his land,his belongings and so on began ruthlessly.To look strong,to own more prosperity,to progress man needed capturing and for this war became essential.

'But do you think war was a right option?'

War has caused the tremendous destruction of land and lives.Royalties just to show their powers have sacrificed many men and women and the result was just the destruction of the state.Many other consequences of war were also seen over the ages.So why War??

It's Ok!
Lets settle on war but can't we have a war with very less destruction and or the destruction is completely finished.Just think of it.It would be so wonderful if happened such.

I have an idea.Instead of using weapons or the materials of mass destruction why not use the laughing gas(the chemical name of laughing gas is nitrous oxide(just for info.))? HAHA .It may sound silly or I may look fanatic in front of you,but just imagine if laughing gas would have been used in the wars what would have been the scene?

America attacking Japan by a capsule of laughing gas instead of an atom bomb and those destroyed cities and the dead people would have been laughing,alive and long-lived.Imagine if a riot broke and people are given a dose of laughing gas instead of gun fires.Many examples can be found in the history where the war could have been stopped and the civilizations could have been saved.Just think of it.!

Now though past can't be changed,we have our presents and futures which can be furnished.
There is nothing worth gaining in these wars.Just destruction and destruction and only destruction.
Please why don't you think that the world is in need of some proper care and get rid of stresses the society is rendering upon it.There is already many reasons to cry and people living unhappy.Lets have a handful of laughter which can make you people healthier.

So its my suggestion to all the governments or citizens either don't fight or use laughing gas in your fights so that the world become happy and a very beautiful place to live in...

Please try once!!
Ravi Vj   
Nov 24, 2013
Undergraduate / Why is what do you want to be such a hard question to answer? Utexas essay C [2]

Really it is quite tough for us all to select what career we want to select in such great number of variants available but congrats to you for selecting a career sat such an early stage in life.Importance is a start,rest all gets completed rather smoothly.Best of luck!!
Ravi Vj   
Nov 24, 2013
Undergraduate / Cross Country mistake! fun (My personal experince) [3]

Yesterday I had one of the most wonderful experiences I have ever had.I and my friend went to Indore on bike,but while returning home at night 11 pm instead of taking the way towards Ujjain,we unknowingly took the path towards Dewas.Holy shit!!!

Having technology but not able to use.Smart Phonessss.
What was to happen,we were moving and moving forward in the inverse direction.As we reached 15km ahead we realized that we were on a wrong track.We had 2 options,first to turn back on the normal path,second to move forward on a totally path.I chose second opposing his decision of taking 1st.

So we continued on the path we were on.
It was suggested by some people at the time we were taking decision that dewas was just a few minutes drive,but after the start,it seemed to me as a several miles distance and it almost took us a 90 minutes the cross point of Ujjain.

We knew it could have went anywhere,Experience could have been at piece or may have been rude but we still drove.
There was a sigh of relief in our minds but there was half a journey which had to covered.
I offered him tea,my favourite beverage at a tea stall to bring down his temper and fear as he was paralyzed of the dark night and frustrated on the lowsense decision I made that night.

Now we started further towards Ujjain crossing Dewas.Here comes the jungle.Hehehahahaha.Ghost stories could have been proved real that day.
The jungle was a quite horrific one.There was a gushy wind blowing which created fear deep inside.Questions flooded my mind that what would happen if we see an aunty wearing white saree calling for help or what if in the midst our bike gets disfunctioned or petrol gets over.I also had a staunch feel of someone following.Ohhh nooo!!.

Full onn horror movie type feel!really..
I was constantly saying jai bajrangbali jai bajrangbali keep my calm.
Hats off to these truck walas .How do these guys travel in such dark nights.Anything can happen yaar!
In the last two years Ujjain was never missed by me as well as him to such an extent as we were missing yesterday.
Nature's truth that you understand the value of something when you go away from it.That was the time that we realized your value,Ujjain.lt was not only because we loved the place soo much or else but the place was our guardian of present time.

We continued at the same pace,crossing the jungles,lot of dark streets,village which had annoying names and dogs on streets.Trucks were our only journey long accompanies.

Got a life's good feeling when we crossed MIT college.We breathed out huge.We realized that we had to cover just a 15 km distance which was no big as compared to what covered upto that point.

We crossed MIT,ALPINE COLLEGE and then we were very near to our destination.
A pothole on the way really made us drown in the depth of half of feet.Hey stupid government wake up!!Repair these highways yaar.We need security.

My liking for music helped making the journey so filled with fun.We sung on a lot of rock,metal and bollywood themes.
The writeup will be incomplete without mentioning the enormous support we delivered to each other on the way.
Chilly weather made our bodies shiver at some points of time,but this factor was just a tiny challenge on our drive.It could not lessen our courage and eagerness.

Mere a 5minute drive was left. Our chants of 'Mahakal baba Ki jai' filled the jungle.
Journeys are totally fun when with friends.
We were very near to our homes.We crossed pipe factory,our GECU college,circuit house and turned towards mahananda Nagar.
Matter of meters from my room.
Fun we had in this cross Country xperiance was unforgettable.This Toofani experience was really amazing.
He dropped me home and went to his.
No one could ever imagine an unplanned,unintentional mistake could turn into a unforgettable experience.
A Ujjain -Indore -Ujjain journey turned into a U-I-U via Dewas journey.
Indore as well as Dewas looks beautiful at night as well.Posh life of Indore and nature essenced life of Dewas was worth remembering but my Ujjain is unbeatable.

This experience came due to our enormous likeliness to see new things,new paths to discover.
I have a message to everyone that never fear to try,because if you try so you learn.
So a wonderful journey was completed on a wish to have many more such xperiances really worth remembering.
Thanks god for support you gave in the long journey making us reach safely.
Such was a worth sharing exp.
"A Cross Country Mistake!fun!!".
Read it,have fun,enjoy. ;)
Ravi Vj   
Nov 24, 2013
Scholarship / Essay about Personal importance to you -"Stay hungry.Stay foolish" [5]

Dude you have delivered a good piece of work.It was quite a simple one.Add quotes and punch lines which will make your essay look very beautiful and catchy.Also compare your experiences and your dreams to those who have had it.You can write a better piece next time.All the best!!
Ravi Vj   
Nov 27, 2013
Writing Feedback / 'Why don't we use laughing gas in wars?' [3]

Sir thank you very much for some real grammar check.I believe these valuable suggestions of yours would help improve my writings....Stay tuned for more thrilling and satirical essays....
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