jackieelynnn
Nov 28, 2013
Undergraduate / LEADERSHIP; Claremont Mckenna Athenaeum Essay - Dale Carnegie [3]
I've personally read How to Win Friends and Influence People and I think it's great, but I think this essay needs a bit more about who you are. Clearly you value Carnegie's advice but when you say it impacted you, show us how it did. Even though the essay is supposed to be about another person, you need to somehow show your leadership skills as well. Otherwise, the bit about Carnegie is very well written!
I've personally read How to Win Friends and Influence People and I think it's great, but I think this essay needs a bit more about who you are. Clearly you value Carnegie's advice but when you say it impacted you, show us how it did. Even though the essay is supposed to be about another person, you need to somehow show your leadership skills as well. Otherwise, the bit about Carnegie is very well written!