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sally12   
May 2, 2009
Writing Feedback / My attitude towards writers is mostly positive. Writers have creative and imaginary minds. [9]

My attitude towards writers is mostly positive. Writers have creative and imaginary minds. I think that each writer has their own uniqueness which makes them stand out when compared with others. The fact that every writer has their own way of thinking and using their brain makes things exciting. Having a positive attitude towards other writers is a good thing because it shows the writer that you are interested in their writing. Writers do learn to become even better when they get negative feedback. If I only give other writers positive feedback about their writing it brings up my own confidence and improves my writing as well. If they can do it then I can too. Knowing how good a write can get makes me strive to become a good or maybe even better writer than them.

As far as writing, my attitude is both positive and negative. I enjoy writing for many reasons. I love being able to write because it allows me to communicate and express myself to others. Some writings, such as Poems and Song lyrics calms be down. Writing letters to friends and family gives me the happiness that I need when they are far away. A negative aspect about writing, for me, is the fact that I usually get frustrated and nervous when it comes to essays and book reports. I honestly have a hard time writing essays when it comes to many situations. Sometimes I end up thinking to hard about the topic I am suppose to be writing about and I end up losing focus and going off topic. Since I don't enjoy writing essays and frequently end up confused by them, I have a habit of quitting on myself before I finish my work. Essay's aren't my kind of thing when it comes to writing.

Other than that I like to write. I like to write many different kinds of things that attract peoples attention. Even If it is just random phrases or words. I like to be funny when I write. As well as be creative and have an open mind. What I like most about writing is that it is another good way to communicate. My favorite writer would be myself. I enjoy what I write no matter what other people say about me. If it sounds good to me then it goes on paper. I get excited when I find something new to write about. I am my own fan. Being my own favorite writer, I can look back at things I have written and easily correct them. I am amused by myself with the things I write. Free writing is a good way to relax your mind. You can write anything and everything that comes to mind. I have asked several people about writing and from their point of view writing to them is not as exciting as to how it is with others. Like I mentioned earlier, everyone has their own way of writing and how they feel about it.
sally12   
May 2, 2009
Research Papers / Essay on No drinking on the beach in San Diego [11]

Takes away relaxation.. and like you said tourists attraction which leads to poor or no business which makes the others become jobless which they are unable to support their families... which the some families enjoy goin to the beach and spend even more money..

Its all about chain reaction..
Some people also you beach water(salt water) to help reduce sores, infections, and sickness
Hope this helps..
sally12   
May 8, 2009
Book Reports / "There is no doubt in mind that Macbeth was a villain"; How Macbeth became a villain. [3]

essay about macbeth



Macbeth was a hero, warrior, and is now a villain. In him there was little to admire. Also because he just became Thane of Cawdor. The feelings and actions of Macbeth is that in him, there is little to admire which is extreme and does not reflect the whole truth. Macbeth is ofcourse a villain of the bad. This wouldn't have happened if he had made right decisions. Unfortunately this is all caused by mis-treatment, being betrayed by his loved ones, not seeing any improvments he has made or the efforts he has put in, also lack of love.

A villain can be defined as a wicked or evil person, or a dramatic or fictional character who is typically at odds with the hero. Macbeth is a goo example of a villain in this situation. The witches did predict that Macbeth would be Thane of Cawdor. This is because it would have been relatively common knowledge that he was Thane of Glam due to the death of his father. The witches did inspire Macbeth with the first murder he had commited. If the witches never greeted him King of Scotland in the first place, he never would have contemplated about killing the king. Macbeth's actions led to him being the king.

He then would still try to maintain the integrity in his behaviour, but when he goes opposite to the system, the system will oppose him making him feel hate for the humanity for whom he was expecting good but gave him nothing. In other words hi loved ones. Some other reasons of becoming a villain is greed, heartbreak, depression, and temptation.

We all have self- preservation instincts. Strong ones. To be truly 'good', is also to be vulnerable. If or when one gets hurt, and depending on the regularity, and the depth of the pain, whether it be emotional, or physical, one is inclined to put up defenses, and become more careful, and dis-trusting. In Macbeth's case he was going through alot.

And with christ we are all over-commers. A person who seems to become stronger when they are bad is actually displaying the pain they went through. They are not necessarily stronger especially if the now commit the offence that was committed against them. At some point Macbeth was not a villain. Yet he was cold hearted and a serial killer. There is no doubt in mind that Macbeth was a villain.
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