tnguyen22
Dec 21, 2013
Undergraduate / Drowning is not an option. John Hopkins U Essay - interests/pursuits/passions/experiences [7]
With that, I was thrown into the seawater, have my stomach filled with every gallon of them and begin to sink faster than a rock. It was the eighth year of my life that my grandfather attempted to drown me for the first time.
In Nha Trang, one of the world's most beautiful bays and the heart of Vietnam's fishing communities, most kids are able to swim as soon as they know how to walk. Although I was raised in a family with strong fishing tradition, for me to swim was out of the question. As a result, I was left out and had to go under my grandfather's "training", which consists of me constantly landing into the water and struggle to stay afloat on a daily basis. In the end, I was only able to swim after two years of ingesting seawater and unconditional sinking.
It was a cloudy day that my grandfather came down with a stroke. It came and left, leaving behind a man unable to use one side of his body. Through medical therapy he was able to stand, then walk around the yard, then around the neighborhood. Six months after his stroke, my grandfather is able to walk normally. Even though his condition wasn't the same as before, I start to develop interests in medicine.
During seventh grade, I came to an realization that knowledge is insignificant unless it is put to work. I then spent the rest of my middle school years volunteering and applying for internship, from volunteering at Social Service Center and General Hospital of Khanh Hoa to work as a intern in Department of Foreign Affair. Through working I learn more about different cultures and wanted to see outside of Nha Trang. By the end of my fourteenth summer, I decided that there are only little left to learn in my hometown and it is time for a new adventure, far away from my tiny hometown and to a new place.
I arrived at JFK Airport in September 2011, the scenery, the people, the weather and everything else was abnormal. I wasn't able to adapt with a new lifestyle and fell under depression, anxiety and homesickness. Everything were chaotic, nothing was the same as I expected. Looking back to the present, I'm currently a Senior at ____ High School, a leader image and an inspiration for younger students. I have failed thousand times, yet I succeed hundreds time. Now I can fully understand the meaning behind what my grandfather once said. Giving up and drown is not an option, as a human being we must stand up after every falls and try again for in the end we will succeed. My current desire is to receive the best education, to be cultivate for the future and to become successful. Hence I believe that John Hopkins University is the fittest out of all for me to gain all the knowledge I desire and opportunity to use it.
Orginally this is a 800 words essay, I then realized that I overdid it and cut some sentences, make it down to 500.
Please be as harsh as possible on me :)
"Drowning is not an option."
With that, I was thrown into the seawater, have my stomach filled with every gallon of them and begin to sink faster than a rock. It was the eighth year of my life that my grandfather attempted to drown me for the first time.
In Nha Trang, one of the world's most beautiful bays and the heart of Vietnam's fishing communities, most kids are able to swim as soon as they know how to walk. Although I was raised in a family with strong fishing tradition, for me to swim was out of the question. As a result, I was left out and had to go under my grandfather's "training", which consists of me constantly landing into the water and struggle to stay afloat on a daily basis. In the end, I was only able to swim after two years of ingesting seawater and unconditional sinking.
It was a cloudy day that my grandfather came down with a stroke. It came and left, leaving behind a man unable to use one side of his body. Through medical therapy he was able to stand, then walk around the yard, then around the neighborhood. Six months after his stroke, my grandfather is able to walk normally. Even though his condition wasn't the same as before, I start to develop interests in medicine.
During seventh grade, I came to an realization that knowledge is insignificant unless it is put to work. I then spent the rest of my middle school years volunteering and applying for internship, from volunteering at Social Service Center and General Hospital of Khanh Hoa to work as a intern in Department of Foreign Affair. Through working I learn more about different cultures and wanted to see outside of Nha Trang. By the end of my fourteenth summer, I decided that there are only little left to learn in my hometown and it is time for a new adventure, far away from my tiny hometown and to a new place.
I arrived at JFK Airport in September 2011, the scenery, the people, the weather and everything else was abnormal. I wasn't able to adapt with a new lifestyle and fell under depression, anxiety and homesickness. Everything were chaotic, nothing was the same as I expected. Looking back to the present, I'm currently a Senior at ____ High School, a leader image and an inspiration for younger students. I have failed thousand times, yet I succeed hundreds time. Now I can fully understand the meaning behind what my grandfather once said. Giving up and drown is not an option, as a human being we must stand up after every falls and try again for in the end we will succeed. My current desire is to receive the best education, to be cultivate for the future and to become successful. Hence I believe that John Hopkins University is the fittest out of all for me to gain all the knowledge I desire and opportunity to use it.
Orginally this is a 800 words essay, I then realized that I overdid it and cut some sentences, make it down to 500.
Please be as harsh as possible on me :)