Writing Feedback / About my self - education; parent; activities; strength; weakness; end notes [4]

Hello Guys, please here is what I have written about my self.
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However, I will liken this to be an article but not really an essay.
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ABOUT MY SELF

My name is Aderibigbe Adedeji David, I was born in Ebute Metta, Lagos on 27th of September 1987. I am the second among children of four of my parent. I am officially from Lagos state but originated from Iseyin, Oyo state. I grew up in Ebute Metta and Meiran area in Lagos respectively till I was 16years old. I currently live in Ota, the suburbs of Ogun State and Lagos state.

My Education
My education and schooling is an adventure, in which I had several experiences from different schools. My first awareness into school was at Corapraige nursery and primary school, Ojokoro Housing Estate, Meiran, Lagos in which I had my nursery class. Not long, I was taken to ABC Joyce nursery and primary school to continue my nursery class, I was again sent to Metro Home School, Amoshe, Meiran Lagos to complete my nursery and primary class due to change of address. When I got to primary five, I was transferred to African church primary school to take my common entrance into secondary school.

I had my secondary education at Lagos state model college, Meiran, Ojokoro, Lagos.
My tertiary education started with the search for admission into the University. After several JAMB examinations with no success, I applied and was admitted into University of Ado Ekiti to run a sand wish program in Business Education at Adeniran Ogunsanya College of Education, Oto, Ijanikin. I later forfeited my admission after two years to pursue a course in Tourism Studies at the National Open University of Nigeria in which I graduated and was awarded B.sc (Hons.) Toursim Studies in 2012.

My Parent
My mother is an officer with the Lagos state civil service commission in the ministry of Education as a Vice Principal. She has been serving the commission for over 25years. I have been highly influenced by her spiritually, academically and financially. We call her 'Iya Maths' meaning, 'Mother of Mathematics' this in turn means she is one of the best women in my life. My father is a student Counsellor at the National Open University of Nigeria. He has been my counsellor in many ramifications such as Academics, Social and Financial. 'Baba Yoruba' as we call him. He remains a source of inspiration in my life. My parent are the primary success of my life, they have immensely contributed to my successes. They give all support to all my future ambitions. They provide all my basic needs in their well willing capacity. My life so far is comprised of a wonderful family crowned with awesome parent.

My Activities
At the age of 16 I began to realize the importance of education and computer literacy. By the time I was 18 years, I had enrolled in a road side computer training centre to acquire some computer basic skills. I realized that being competent in interpersonal communication shall immensely contribute to my future pursuit, I there after, went for many personal development conferences and joined several humanitarian organizations such as Nigerian Red Cross and Positive outreach foundation in which several projects has been carried out. I have actively participated being a field officer, coordinator and supervisor.

My Strength
Practically, I have special interest in blogging, swimming, travelling, meeting and entertaining people. Due to this cause, I have an Entertainment Platform called DEJIMANAIRE KING ENTERTAINMENT DejimanaireKingEnt BlogSpot com . I cannot see myself ever giving up these hobbies, as it provides ways for me to show my creative and innovative side.

I see my interest in pursuing Computer science, Movie Making and Video editing capable in a well rounded ability to success in any future environment I find myself.

Further in my interest in computer literacy I had touched areas such as Web Development and Administration, Computer Networking and Data Base. I co-manage Mr Latin Foundation website mrlatinfoundation org and also developed blogs based on Google blogger. I have seeming exposure to web development software's and/or Content Management systems (CMS) such as Joomla, Drupal, Impress Pages and WordPress, with this knowledge I had created numerous blogs to my profile. I can proudly say being the owner of a website project called www aridunu com is a life long endeavour that shall solidify and prove my love for computing and technology in general.

My Weakness
I aim towards perfection and I believe I can better improve in the areas in which I am weak. However, I have seemingly not identified major weak points, however, I have observed that first nervousness towards a problem or situation is a weakness. In very short time, I surmount it.

My End Notes
I have learned over the years that life is not a bed of roses and nothing good comes easy. In this knowledge I have set an edge of strength into the pursuit of my periodic aims and objectives.

I stand to be corrected and always opened to learning.
I hope to become a teacher simply because to be a true hero I should be able to breed stronger followers to succeed me when the days of my strength are gone.

Writing Feedback / My Life Goals; I came to realize my passion in the Entertainment Industry and in Computing [4]

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MY LIFE GOALS

In times being I have had aspiration more in abundance about my life to become an impact to my family, society, country and to humanity at large.

Having known that I have no power over who my parent will be, where I shall be born and when I will be born.
In a world of uncertainty, I have sort through different mind occupations leading to good or bad. I have been able to realize that either of these two shall become of me in the sooner or later future. Gladly enough, I have been able to resolve in settling for the good.

Journeying through who I want to become in life in time past has changed from time to time as I grow, mature and become more opened to life realities. When I was a teenager I often think life was a bed of roses, getting ones heart desires on a silver platter. However, as grew older, reality dawned on me and I immediately realized that I must work hard towards my goals.

Unfortunately in Nigeria, there are lots of unsolved problem which needs to be giving a solution. Lies in these problems are series of benchmark of what I want to become. In a resolve, having gone through life's disappointments and an un-enabling society that does not promote self development, I remain agitated through my determination and focus to become a creator of opportunities for others to fulfil their career.

After observing myself over the years, I came to realize my passion in the Entertainment Industry and also in Computing.
Entertainment in my perspective is a food to the body soul and spirit, in which is also a therapy to the stressed. I find my self to be someone who gets the attention of crowds through my audible voice, body gestures and fair skill to control people's attention. These three features have helped me become a Master of Ceremony (M.C). Therefore, I aspire to become a Professional Master of Ceremony. In addition to my passion in entertainment, I created a platform called DEJIMANAIRE KING ENETERTAINMENT. This platform focuses on general entertainment services within capacity and also a platform to hype young talented upcoming music artiste to set a pace for them in their music career. In sooner time I hope to see the platform becoming a well meaning organization because I see the platform as myself. In my continued effort to become relevant in the entertainment industry, I have taking a step in learning video editing. I can now work around the latest video editing software Adobe Creative Suits (CS). I see my self becoming a professional in Adobe CS packages. However, I shall continue to keep my self abreast of any latest software as time goes by.

In this jet age, anyone who is not synchronizing into the latest technological advancement shall be known to be living in the dark and past even at present. My passion for computing is dated far back when I was in Secondary School. My endless and continued passion for technology has in turned made me a well rounded personality to fit into gathering of modern computer technology discussion among elites. After thorough search and touches into I.T (Information Technology), from Web development based on Joomla, Impress Pages, WordPress, Presta Shop, Blogger, fair idea about data base, and some knowledge on networking and its administration, I have been able to find a ground in pressing my interesting in web administration and all that has to do with back end web management. In my plight to make solidify my interest in my passion I was opportune to co-manage a Mr Latin Foundation website mrlatinfoundationorg and I have created blogs such as nounabeokuta blogspot com , dejimanairekingent blogspot com , misspeppeh blogspot com , and host of others, however, my personal website project called aridunu . com 'A sight of Happiness' is a project I see become as more socially, financially and economically influential as much as facebook.

In a society like ours where future is not promised, I had developed an alternative plan should in case at all in all nothing works out. I shall by opportunity learn be to a professional barber.

I shall conclusively say all I aspire to achieve are my life goals
I believe I had set my foot on the right path based on my passion and I believe I shall not be weary of any challenges that come my way in these fields.

I want to be a success in my efforts to living life of fulfilment and being a mentor to others.