jayhawk236
May 12, 2014
Scholarship / Why I am a worthy candidate for this scholarship [5]
Prompt: describe your educational and professional goals and the reason you feel you deserve the award. Maximum 300 words
As the first generation in my family to attend college, I understand the value of higher education and how it would impact my life. College education gives me the opportunity to explore new ideas, improve critical thinking, and enhance my skills. It is the gateway to better options and a chance to succeed in life. I am very passionate about pharmaceutical chemistry and determined to pursue the doctor of pharmacy degree. I have chosen this career because I truly appreciate the conscientiousness, honorable contributions, and the commitment to public service of healthcare practitioners. With the knowledge acquired in school, I hope to deliver optimal pharmaceutical care and attentive counsel on medicines for patients.
Yet, the skyrocketing cost of college is a stress for my family. Receiving the X scholarship will be a significant contributor that lifts off the financial burden and helps me to accomplish my goals. I sincerely hope to be a worthy candidate for the scholarship because I have a strong commitment to community service, involvements in extra-curriculum activities, and especially an utmost serious attitude toward education. Every week, I dedicate my time to volunteer at X where I can gain insight into the medical world and further develop my public speaking and communication skills. In school, I am on the Principal's Honors Roll, a member of the National Honors Society, a tutor, and many more academic and spiritual clubs. I have studied diligently and relentlessly in order to improve my English proficiency. With earnest desire and determination, I propel myself to initiate inexorable effort to conquer my weaknesses. I am motivated to push my own limits and persevere to achieve my goals. If I could receive this valuable scholarship, I would try my best to achieve highest results in my study to deserve the great chance you have offered.
Word count: 310 words. Should I cut out something to make it fit 300 words?
Prompt: describe your educational and professional goals and the reason you feel you deserve the award. Maximum 300 words
As the first generation in my family to attend college, I understand the value of higher education and how it would impact my life. College education gives me the opportunity to explore new ideas, improve critical thinking, and enhance my skills. It is the gateway to better options and a chance to succeed in life. I am very passionate about pharmaceutical chemistry and determined to pursue the doctor of pharmacy degree. I have chosen this career because I truly appreciate the conscientiousness, honorable contributions, and the commitment to public service of healthcare practitioners. With the knowledge acquired in school, I hope to deliver optimal pharmaceutical care and attentive counsel on medicines for patients.
Yet, the skyrocketing cost of college is a stress for my family. Receiving the X scholarship will be a significant contributor that lifts off the financial burden and helps me to accomplish my goals. I sincerely hope to be a worthy candidate for the scholarship because I have a strong commitment to community service, involvements in extra-curriculum activities, and especially an utmost serious attitude toward education. Every week, I dedicate my time to volunteer at X where I can gain insight into the medical world and further develop my public speaking and communication skills. In school, I am on the Principal's Honors Roll, a member of the National Honors Society, a tutor, and many more academic and spiritual clubs. I have studied diligently and relentlessly in order to improve my English proficiency. With earnest desire and determination, I propel myself to initiate inexorable effort to conquer my weaknesses. I am motivated to push my own limits and persevere to achieve my goals. If I could receive this valuable scholarship, I would try my best to achieve highest results in my study to deserve the great chance you have offered.
Word count: 310 words. Should I cut out something to make it fit 300 words?