Undergraduate / Is it true, that one can always find opportunity, even in trouble? [3]

Please score my essay. The purpose for this piece of writing is my admission test for a Social Science programme. Please suggest me some tips for introduction and conclusion of an essay.

Troubles are part of our life. Everyone has troubles in their life but it doesn't mean they loose their hope for the sake of the problems, they are going through. One should always try to overcome the troubles, they are facing, in a way that no one get hurts. It's necessary to be calm even in trouble because one can't find any solution in panic.

There is an adage that every problem has a solution, just need an eye, to find that solution. Everyone has living their life with their own troubles and he thinks his problem is bigger than anyone else in this universe. It's a natural thinking and everyone thinks the same. No one in this world is living a happy life without troubles.For example, a mother faces a lot of troubles in her entire life for her children. Likewise, a father or a child his their own troubles.

Lastly, One should always try to find a way to solve his troubles and never panic in troubles. Always be hopeful for a better result and keep on trying, even if one should face failure.

Writing Feedback / Always prefer prevention from the every first stage of any health problem [2]

Indeed, prevention is much better than cure. But now a days, people don't take the problem serious until it reaches the worst stage. Like people are aware of the disadvantage of smoking but still they smoke until they have to face problems like cancer.

From our childhood, we are taught to brush twice a day, take bath daily, not to eat too much sweets and many good habits but still we are unable to follow all those instruction which are very necessary for our health.Small actions can make huge effects. If we try to prevent our health rather than making it worse and wait for the cure. Prevention saves your time as well as money. Cure of a disease cost too much money and takes a lot of time. Prevention is beneficial in every way. As Benjamin Franklin quoted "An ounce of prevention is better than a pound of cure".

Lastly, One should always prefer prevention from the every first stage of any health problem.