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Sep 15, 2014
Undergraduate / Tell UoPeople a little bit about your village, city, region or country and what makes it unique. [5]
Hello, this is a 70-100 words statement. Can someone give me comments on the content, and my grammar issues. If possible is there other perspectives best suit this essay --Thanks
Batam island is a popular tourist destination in my country --Indonesia. Eventhough this island is very small, there are many interesting places for visitors to visit, such as; Ocarina Beach, Tanjung Pingir Beach, and Barelang Beach. Swimming on these beaches are safe. Another fascinating feature is the live seafood and local fresh fruits, at fair prices from local stores and restaurants. Accomodations are also very convenient, several hotels provide nice sceenary and panorama view of neighbor country -- Singapore. These remarkable features make my city a famouse place for people who come here. (92 words).
Hello, this is a 70-100 words statement. Can someone give me comments on the content, and my grammar issues. If possible is there other perspectives best suit this essay --Thanks
Batam island is a popular tourist destination in my country --Indonesia. Eventhough this island is very small, there are many interesting places for visitors to visit, such as; Ocarina Beach, Tanjung Pingir Beach, and Barelang Beach. Swimming on these beaches are safe. Another fascinating feature is the live seafood and local fresh fruits, at fair prices from local stores and restaurants. Accomodations are also very convenient, several hotels provide nice sceenary and panorama view of neighbor country -- Singapore. These remarkable features make my city a famouse place for people who come here. (92 words).