Scholarship / I have a desire to make a great things; UWC experience [2]

i am going to apply for the uwc scholarship and i want your opinions please in this essay .

1. What do you think you will gain from a UWC experience and what will you bring to the UWC colleges?

I am from those persons who have something inside them that says you must not sleep every day before you do some thing that give its weight in the society. I believe that the humans came to this world for doing some thing and giving some thing to the people so I have a desire to make a great thing.

By entering the UWC I will be able to make my dreams truth and achieve my targets. I have a big dream which needs a good education and which I will find it in UWC . my dream is like a basket in the basketball game it is high and very narrow goal it needs a big force, too much focus and resoluteness so I will gain my force from UWC and which is knowledge and education and a will learn focusing and resoluteness from the life style new friends new cultures and languages, there I will have new friends and we will teach each others our cultures and languages and this is what I like.

The best thing which I liked in UWC is the diversity which I like it you can have Italian friend talk with him English and learn with him about American culture and play African games and sing Chinese songs you will feel that the world is not only a one country where all people live happily and peacefully.

By this experience I will be depending on my self with out my parents which is a new and strange thing so I am amazing to try that because I like doing strange and new things and discover and learn from that all. From that I will get self confidence and I will have a strong character which will help me to run towards my goal like an arrow moving to his target.

From the experience I will learn to help my nation and my society and the international society and work for a peace world.
There in the campus I will be always ready to help and serve my friends and all UWC members we will be there as a family in one home and be good friends and work hard for all.

Undergraduate / As my motto is "never settle", I'm looking for strength and power to go forward direct to my goal [3]

can you check this now please this other essay and i think what you adviced me is comfortable for another essay which i will, write now which is how the UWC will help me reaching my goals and what are they.

5. Why should we choose YOU to go to UWC? (Maximum 200 words)
As my motto is "never settle" I keep searching for what give me strength and power to go forward direct to my goal, and I find this scholarship and when I am applying to such a college I know that I am for it and I can do it and I know that it is my place because I learnt from my previous experience how to make a thing possible or impossible it is me only who will decide that that is hard and easy and if I want to do a thing I will do it even if I want to move a mountain . I have resoluteness that can make me a man that makes his dreams truth and let him reach his target in the past year when I entered the high school in turkey I kept struggling and I didn't gave up until I reached the small goal I kept, when you have that resoluteness and be a hardworking person and have the faith you will not lose even my marks was low and low in the past year I had faith in my heart that I can do it and didn't stop until I did it.

I have a dream that serve the humanity and fight all kind of devil small and big I want to make that dream truth and every I don't sleep until I be sure that I steped the correct step towards the goal .

And before I started applying I didn't decide to apply only when I was sure that this will help me , I am sure now that this is a big step to my goal and willl shorten the way for me and by the help of the UWC and the friends there my goal will be nearer and nearer and I will reach it not only by my self but byhalf of th UWC family there .

I am very happy that I got the chance to apply and you gave me it and I am very eagerly intant to go there and change my life and break the routine , this all will become truth and I will reach the goal and the first cause will be you and the friends there and the different life so give me the chance to change everything by choosing me.