Writing Feedback / TOEFL - more happy live and more chance to become successful for kids raised up less strictly [4]

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Undoubtedly, every devoted parents have a yearning for their children's success in the future - children are excepted to be giant elites. In recent years, parents become more strict than any other period. This phenomenon triggers a heated discussion about whether parents should set strict rules to their children or not. As far as I am concerned, strict rules play a less significant role on the success.

For children, discovering what is happening around the world independently has a far great impact on the development of children's personality trait. Although suffering lots of difficulties, pains, even tears, it is the surest way to learn the way of self-control, and it will bring incredible fortune to children. My friend, Liang, which is a senior manager of google, is a good case. When he was young, his parents seldom interfered his study, giving him adequate space to manage his study. Even though he was weak in chemistry, he never was asked to attend extra cram schools, or required to achieve a good score in chemistry. By contrast, he owned the rights to plan his study, definitely, totally, and independently. Every month, his parents reviewed his study, help him resolve problems. Benefiting from it, he learned how to schedule his study, as well others. It is the freedom of control that makes him a successful, potential, self-control person now.

Furthermore, strict rules sometimes lead to the lost of happiness. It can not be imaged that under the strict rules, children have the ability to enjoy the happy time which they should have.

My parents like all of parents want me to become a elite, therefor, in my childhood, they acted as rough parents. Everyday, I was blamed for the noise which I made at dinner. Eventually, I hated dinners and my parents alike, refused eating in return. Fortunately, my parents relaxed their requirements, allowed me to make a little noise gradually. They were not hurry to correct this misbehavior immediately, instead of step by step. After that, my parents bring me up in a quite relax way, now.

Admittedly, however, I am not saying that children should have no strict rules on everything. They are too young, having no integral awareness of the disciplines, having no study habitats. Rules are useful for children to develop good work ethics and bring up good study habitats. However, severe rules sometimes cause negative efforts, leading to the happiness of childhood.

Overall, success is not easy to measure, every child deserves a better life. I believe that with less strict rules, children will live a more happy live and also have more chances to become success in the future.