Undergraduate / UC Econ Major Transfer Prompts Fall 2015 [2]

I think you have answered all the aspects of the primary question. You have included what was asked for in neat order, which makes it very easy to read and understand, I also think you have thoroughly discussed how your interest in economics and how it has grown and what has caused that, and your future motive goals. I very much as well like the fact that your work is very clear, you have not embellished it with complex words. I also like your attitude going about being successful and overcoming your obstacles. Overall I think you did a neat job. Although I would have liked to know more about your high school experience in developing your passion in learning about economics, besides the economic course you took maybe you could have included council or clubs in school that lead you to be even more integrated and intrigued in the field of economics.I don't know what to advice you properly about, as I'm still learning and developing my critic skills. I hope I have helped you some way and I apologize if I did not cover something you were looking for more comment on. I hope you get hold of one your fellow classmates or friend and personally ask them to read your Personal Statement. Good job!

Grammar, Usage / How to use quotation marks at the end of a sentence. [14]

Put quotations marks in your explanation around a specific word or phrase; using appropriate grammar

In a literary essay when you are explaining your proof (dialogue) are you only suppose to put quotations marks in your explanation around a specific word or phrase from the dialogue you used in your essay or are you allowed to also put quotation marks around a specific word or phrase that is not from the dialogue within the essay but within the story you are referencing.

For example:

Proof/Dialogue: "Tom was in his backyard sitting still, his face void of any expression, toys surrounding him untouched."

Explanation: Tom sitting in his backyard completely still and doing nothing shows that he was either taken into another dimensional world, or he was troubled by something so severe that he completely blanked out as his face was "rarely" ever so "empty and scary blank".