missytender
Dec 26, 2014
Writing Feedback / I've written 3 paragraphs of urban life - an introduction, central paragraph and conclusion [2]
Please tell me my mistakes.
do you ever thinking about urban life as you strungle with it's chalenges every day? If you thinking about it , Perhaps the first things that comes to your mind are air pollution , traffic , Overpopulation and etc... . Daily city people are Scrimmaging with many problems like this but most of them because of their job and other restrictions may not migrate.
One of the serious problems of urban life is air pollution that associated with overcrowding and traffic. other reason for air pollution are greenhouse gas emission and factories. The minimum contribution that Urban people can do to reduce pollution is greater use of public transport. Efforts to reduce air pollution in the city is one of the conditions for healthy living.
Although urban life has its problems such as air pollution ,traffic and overpopulation , but most people have a dependency like dependency to job and these dependencies are forced to continue living in the city. So people should strive to make the more healthy life in city.
Please tell me my mistakes.
do you ever thinking about urban life as you strungle with it's chalenges every day? If you thinking about it , Perhaps the first things that comes to your mind are air pollution , traffic , Overpopulation and etc... . Daily city people are Scrimmaging with many problems like this but most of them because of their job and other restrictions may not migrate.
One of the serious problems of urban life is air pollution that associated with overcrowding and traffic. other reason for air pollution are greenhouse gas emission and factories. The minimum contribution that Urban people can do to reduce pollution is greater use of public transport. Efforts to reduce air pollution in the city is one of the conditions for healthy living.
Although urban life has its problems such as air pollution ,traffic and overpopulation , but most people have a dependency like dependency to job and these dependencies are forced to continue living in the city. So people should strive to make the more healthy life in city.
