linglinzhang
Feb 26, 2015
Writing Feedback / We shouldn't ignore the underlying danger of spending great amount of time practicing sport; TOEFL [3]
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I will attend to TOEFL test in April 12 and I am not good at writing...I want to evaluate my writing skill,and gain more proposal of you.
I will appreciate your criticisms and suggestions a lot!
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Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is commonly acknowledged that doing sport is vital in one's life.Many parents send their young children to learn a kind of sports such as tennis and swimming.There is no doubt that practicing sport will benefit the children a lot,but on the contrary,spending too much time training sport will sometimes do harm to the young children,physically and psychologically.My reasons can be articulated as following.
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Hi there new friends :)
Since I'm a freshman here I even didn't know how to start a new thread at first...I found the cute button after log in and gained the opportunity to communicate with you guys,it's my pleasure to meet you ;)
I will attend to TOEFL test in April 12 and I am not good at writing...I want to evaluate my writing skill,and gain more proposal of you.
I will appreciate your criticisms and suggestions a lot!
Nice to meet you again ~
Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is commonly acknowledged that doing sport is vital in one's life.Many parents send their young children to learn a kind of sports such as tennis and swimming.There is no doubt that practicing sport will benefit the children a lot,but on the contrary,spending too much time training sport will sometimes do harm to the young children,physically and psychologically.My reasons can be articulated as following.
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