tiawulansari
Mar 15, 2015
Writing Feedback / Australian boys and girls of age 5-14 leisure activities [4]
Hello, kindly to check my writing
Thank you in advance
-Tia-
The graph illustrates the preferred leisure activities of boys and girls age 5-14 in Australia and is measured in percentage. Overall, it is immediately apparent that watching television or videos is the most favorite activity of Australian children.
With regard to watching television or videos, 100% of boys and girls in Australia do this kind of activity in leisure time and become the most activity done by children.
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Hello, kindly to check my writing
Thank you in advance
-Tia-
The graph illustrates the preferred leisure activities of boys and girls age 5-14 in Australia and is measured in percentage. Overall, it is immediately apparent that watching television or videos is the most favorite activity of Australian children.
With regard to watching television or videos, 100% of boys and girls in Australia do this kind of activity in leisure time and become the most activity done by children.
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