Posts by Ikrame

Ikrame

Mar 26, 2015

Writing Feedback / Students from the age of 16 should be encouraged to have a part time job [2]

Hi, I am new here, so I dont really know how this works but I have to write an essay for my English class. However, I seem to have a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Can someone please help me with this? Thank you in advance.

Financial issues are most of the time the reasons why students have a part time job. However, there are students who do not have financial issues and do not have or need a job. Money is just one of the reasons to have a part time job. There are many more other important reasons that are going to be discussed in this essay. Student time is the best time to experiment with one or different kinds of jobs to know where the interest are.

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Ikrame

Mar 26, 2015

Graduate / I believe images are one of the best ways to educate people. SOP for Illustration MFA in SCAD [4]

Since I was young, I've always used drawings and paintings as a way to express and communicate my feelings, now I want to use and expand my abilities to help people with them.

In stead I would say: Since I was young, I have always used drawings and paintings as a way to express and to communicate my feelings. Now I would like to use and expand my abilities to help people with them.

During my last years of college, ~~I decided I would dedicate~~ I decided to dedicate my senior thesis to this issue

I learned about SCAD when I was fourteen while I was slowly learning how to draw, and I knew I wanted to study there

instead: I learned about SCAD when I was fourteen. While I was slowly learning how to draw, I knew I wanted to study there.

Ikrame

Mar 26, 2015

Student Talk / How to improve English writing? Learning through reading. [130]

Read a lot of newspapers too! change your social media accounts to English. Write once in a while about a topic (it doesnt have to be a large article) and give it to someone so they can correct it for you.