roserosiana
Jun 9, 2015
Scholarship / Calling all the SCHOLARSHIP HUNTERS! Applying for Graphic Design Department [3]
Hello everybody,
First of all, my name's Rosiana. I'm from Indonesia, i was excited to found this forum. I hope it'll help me with the essay i have made couple days ago. i wanna apply turkiye scholarship next year for Graphic Design Department and i need your help to correct my essay. because honestly my english not perfect enough for this level. so, here is my essay :
I. Please explain your expectations from studying in turkiye and express your future plans :
Turkiye is a gate between two rich continents : europe and asia. By that condition, turkiye has a lot to offer. One of them is high quality education. People coming from all over the world. So i will be able to exchange ideas and opinions with them in the same time. Different skills, the way of thinking, different culture that is not only rich my knowladge but also enrich my experience for the next steps. By study in turkiye, im expecting it will definitely change my minds and perspective. After i finished my study in turkiye with a degree in graphic design, i will have the best skills to enter a wide variety of careers in the field including branding, publishing, image-making and editorial design. And consist to my dream, to build my own studio where i can gather all indonesian creative youth and patch all their aspirations. So we will self-prepared to compate globally. We will show to the world that indonesia graphic designer could be aligned with world class graphic designer. Not only a follower, with the inovative things we make we are going to be a trendsetter for the next era.
II. Please explain why you choose Turkiye for higher education :
Turkiye is a natural bridge where the East meets the West. This unique concepts create a perfect environments and strong atmosphere where everyone has been invited to dig all the potential we could use for our education. By choose this great student country i will get so many opportunities. I will learn from the experts to become an expert in what was previously my skill. The modern influx from west side which take an important role will give all student chances to study or work with the latest equipment, a flexible and modern way. I will study directly from the source that means my brain will record the latest knowledge. Another benefit is enjoy the beautiful friendship with other students that coming from everywhere. Through that, i will get chances to test my skills by taking part in international competition and also open a wide range of job opportunities after i finished my study in turkey.
III. Please express the reasons for your department/program of study preferences and briefly explain how your educational background relates :
Today, design take an important role in many fields. Many industries using design to promote their brand and their products without talking to much about it underictly. Design not only a picture and text, design is about how to manage colours in harmony and put a strategy to make the reader get the message of itself. we know, apple inc. is a big company with a bitten apple as the logo. it mean, even a big company like apple inc. need a small logo. simple, chic, and so easy to remember. altough i took software engineering as my major for 3 years, my hoby and passion on design brought me to this path. i have been working for over 1 year at this field, and all my clients satisfied by what i have been created for them. software engineering not completely software engineering, i also taught graphic design during in high school. how to create logo using corel and photos manipulation on photoshop. and i got a perfect score for that field between 80 until 95.
and yes, i need your opinion and your advice about this essay. is it make senses, it's bad essay or what i supposed to fix from this essay. so let me know all about it, let me know what mistakes i have done on this essay. thank you :)
REGARD,
Rosiana
Hello everybody,
First of all, my name's Rosiana. I'm from Indonesia, i was excited to found this forum. I hope it'll help me with the essay i have made couple days ago. i wanna apply turkiye scholarship next year for Graphic Design Department and i need your help to correct my essay. because honestly my english not perfect enough for this level. so, here is my essay :
I. Please explain your expectations from studying in turkiye and express your future plans :
Turkiye is a gate between two rich continents : europe and asia. By that condition, turkiye has a lot to offer. One of them is high quality education. People coming from all over the world. So i will be able to exchange ideas and opinions with them in the same time. Different skills, the way of thinking, different culture that is not only rich my knowladge but also enrich my experience for the next steps. By study in turkiye, im expecting it will definitely change my minds and perspective. After i finished my study in turkiye with a degree in graphic design, i will have the best skills to enter a wide variety of careers in the field including branding, publishing, image-making and editorial design. And consist to my dream, to build my own studio where i can gather all indonesian creative youth and patch all their aspirations. So we will self-prepared to compate globally. We will show to the world that indonesia graphic designer could be aligned with world class graphic designer. Not only a follower, with the inovative things we make we are going to be a trendsetter for the next era.
II. Please explain why you choose Turkiye for higher education :
Turkiye is a natural bridge where the East meets the West. This unique concepts create a perfect environments and strong atmosphere where everyone has been invited to dig all the potential we could use for our education. By choose this great student country i will get so many opportunities. I will learn from the experts to become an expert in what was previously my skill. The modern influx from west side which take an important role will give all student chances to study or work with the latest equipment, a flexible and modern way. I will study directly from the source that means my brain will record the latest knowledge. Another benefit is enjoy the beautiful friendship with other students that coming from everywhere. Through that, i will get chances to test my skills by taking part in international competition and also open a wide range of job opportunities after i finished my study in turkey.
III. Please express the reasons for your department/program of study preferences and briefly explain how your educational background relates :
Today, design take an important role in many fields. Many industries using design to promote their brand and their products without talking to much about it underictly. Design not only a picture and text, design is about how to manage colours in harmony and put a strategy to make the reader get the message of itself. we know, apple inc. is a big company with a bitten apple as the logo. it mean, even a big company like apple inc. need a small logo. simple, chic, and so easy to remember. altough i took software engineering as my major for 3 years, my hoby and passion on design brought me to this path. i have been working for over 1 year at this field, and all my clients satisfied by what i have been created for them. software engineering not completely software engineering, i also taught graphic design during in high school. how to create logo using corel and photos manipulation on photoshop. and i got a perfect score for that field between 80 until 95.
and yes, i need your opinion and your advice about this essay. is it make senses, it's bad essay or what i supposed to fix from this essay. so let me know all about it, let me know what mistakes i have done on this essay. thank you :)
REGARD,
Rosiana