franklin62
May 20, 2015
Letters / An undergraduate student of Telecom Saint-Etienne writes the Motivation Letter for Brasil exchange [2]
Hello,
I've made a motivation letter and I want know where I've made errors ?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am currently an undergraduate student of Telecom Saint-Etienne at the University of Saint-Etienne. With this letter I would like to express my strong interest for participation at your Student Exchange Programme during your second semester of 2015.
I have principally studied Embarked Electronics, telecommunications and web development during my curses. After studying the courses on your website I have found a great selection that will be relevant for my interests. Indeed, I am very interesting by your formation "engenharia de teleinformatica". In consequence, your university is a very good opportunity for me to continue to improve in theses domains.
Another major reason for applying to studying in Fortaleza is the opportunity of improving my Portuguese skills. Indeed, I began the Portuguese language the last year. That gave me the occasion to discover a language and a culture that seem me very interesting. I would like in consequence, have the occasion to continue my learning of Portuguese in Fortaleza.
Finally, I think that studying abroad is about not only acquiring knowledge, but also about discovering new things. One of my desires is to meet different people of different nationalities, cultures, lifestyles, and points of view. The diversity will broaden my horizons and help me to become more involved in the global community. Studying abroad would be a significant life experience and, as we know, experience is the best teacher.
I hope a semester at the University of Fortaleza will help me grow personally and provide knowledge I will be able to use for future studies at my home institution, and in my job later.
Best regards,
Hello,
I've made a motivation letter and I want know where I've made errors ?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am currently an undergraduate student of Telecom Saint-Etienne at the University of Saint-Etienne. With this letter I would like to express my strong interest for participation at your Student Exchange Programme during your second semester of 2015.
I have principally studied Embarked Electronics, telecommunications and web development during my curses. After studying the courses on your website I have found a great selection that will be relevant for my interests. Indeed, I am very interesting by your formation "engenharia de teleinformatica". In consequence, your university is a very good opportunity for me to continue to improve in theses domains.
Another major reason for applying to studying in Fortaleza is the opportunity of improving my Portuguese skills. Indeed, I began the Portuguese language the last year. That gave me the occasion to discover a language and a culture that seem me very interesting. I would like in consequence, have the occasion to continue my learning of Portuguese in Fortaleza.
Finally, I think that studying abroad is about not only acquiring knowledge, but also about discovering new things. One of my desires is to meet different people of different nationalities, cultures, lifestyles, and points of view. The diversity will broaden my horizons and help me to become more involved in the global community. Studying abroad would be a significant life experience and, as we know, experience is the best teacher.
I hope a semester at the University of Fortaleza will help me grow personally and provide knowledge I will be able to use for future studies at my home institution, and in my job later.
Best regards,