Essays / Discuss the development of myocardial infarction; an opening line [6]

Hello everyone thank you very much for all the information you gave me, I wish I could understand better, my problem is English is my second language I have started the essay but un sure if am writing it as descriptive essay or not.

My topic question for one of my sub title is define the anatomical structures and altered physiology that would be affected by a patient presenting with Myocardial infarction.

I have the below paragraph, can someone please correct and direct me if I am answering the question at all.

The process of heart attack happens in blood vessels that supply blood and oxygen to our heart of normal heat functions, the disturb urns of this circulation will pose a risk of developing myocardial infarction, these condition results form a complete blockage of an artery that supply blood to an area of the heart. The most commonly affected vessels are the aorta, coronary and carotid artery (book 9th edition) this result from a condition called atherosclerosis which thickening and stiffening of the arterial, this is resulted from the damage and accumulation of plaque in I the tunica intima. This injury to the endothelium is a result of foreign components such smoke, viral or bacterial infection and also hypertension from the increased pressure of the blood in order to reach the heart, in turn this pressure makes the plaque unstable and may result in arterial wall fraying and ulcerating which ends up rapturing increasing the chances of myocardial infarction.( Book refrences).

Essays / Discuss the development of myocardial infarction; an opening line [6]

Thank you very much for all the information and correcting me, how ever I have written my introduction if you take a look for me

Acute myocardial infarction is a disease that has affected a considerable number on people in Australia and Worldwide. This disease is mostly known as heart attack. Despite a number of interventions that have evolved over the years there is still a considerable number of people that die or suffer from this condition. According to the heart foundation of Australia they are currently an estimated 35000 people that have suffered from heart attack at some point in their lives. Each year around 54000 people suffer from this condition, as result heart attack has claimed 8,611 lives in 2013. This profound number seemed very high for the population of Australia; however the American heart foundation has identified those cardiovascular diseases which include heart attack as a leading cause of death worldwide by claiming 17, 3 million people per year. They are many causes behind so many lives being lost. An exploration of this condition would identify in this essay, defining myocardial infarction, anatomical structures and the altered physiology that are affected by (MI). Expanding on identifying some of the common risk factors and their signs and symptoms that patients may develop when experiencing an (MI) and also discussing how this condition is diagnosed including the delivery of treatment from medical and nursing treatment

it includes all the relevant topic am going to discuss