Scholarship / THE BEST CITY IN THE WORLD essay - I need to pass my prepare class [2]

I'm living in Turkey and i'm studying english language teaching but i've a exam to pass prepare class and they want me to write an essay i'm working on it.Here one of them can you correct the mistakes and help me to write a good essay i use 5 paragraph type of essay if there is any mistakes please tell me.Thank you

THE BEST CITY IN THE WORLD

There are a lot of good and famous city in the world.Some of them famous for their cultural way and some of them the way they are looking etc.In my opinion there is a city is more cooler,cultural and spectacular than any others.

Istanbul has been capital for a lot of country.That's why,Istanbul has mixed culture of religion and society.In 2015,Istanbul is the most famous and crowd city of Turkey.

In istanbul,you can see modern life besides cultural places,For example Istiklal street is a good place to being social and have fun but like 10 munites walk away you can see the Galata Tower.it was used to fire tower before decades ago,you can see whole Istanbul view in Galata Tower.

On the other hand,imagine a city it's both have europa and asia on location,Istanbul have.From medieval times,until now istanbul's location always impress the governments

To sum up,Istanbul's location,social life and culture show that Istanbul is the best city in the world

Graduate / Parents do what they saw and learned from their parents [5]

Can you correct my mistakes so i will write better next time
ARE PARENTS BEST TEACHER

Almost all kid's best friend and teacher are their parents but sometimes their education way might be wrong because they aren't educated to be a teacher.Parents do what they saw from their parents

Generally,parents are trying to behaved all kids with the same education.They don't care how their personality and emotions they should have care different to the each other

The kids are trying to copy whatever their parents do so in a big family every member of family have a big responsibility about that because kids are copy whoever they see big,it's a natural thing because the people who bigger than the kid is survive long enough to get big.The kid think like if i will do the same thing i can survive,too

Parent's weakiest part is love.Because of their love to their kids sometimes they choose the wrong parent's wont let them choose bad and learn real life from it

Parents are first and best teacher they teach walk,speak and good manners before we reach ''The real world''