shimkor12
Sep 8, 2015
Undergraduate / My mother has shown me the right path to take in life among others how to giving back to community [4]
College Essay : Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you.
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I would Like some feedback and help on this college essay topic, I have a rough draft down below. Any comments, or advice would be great.
Thank You
Someone who has had significant Influence on me would be my mother Stacy Shimko because, she has shown me the right path to take in life, and through her giving back to the community, I have been influenced to give back to others and assist needy people through her actions.
One reason my mother has had a big influence on my life is because she has shown me the right path in life. As I have many hobbies and activities that I would like to pursue as a career or job, I have had many difficulties choosing what would be number one thing I should strive for now. When I tell her careers and jobs that I would like to pursue, she helps me set objectives for myself. She sets high standards to for myself as I should be performing everything I do at the best of my ability. My mother always gives me pointers onto what career plans I should take, and to always leave options open for myself as I can chase a career that is right for me. She drives me to connections and I make sure that a take the chance to always talk to adults that could help strive me for future success, as they often give me directions as to where I should go.
My second reason would be through my mother giving back to the community, influenced me to give back to others and assist needy people. My mom always was involved with church services and free lunches. I decided that I would go to help out one day, and after seeing that what my mom did had high influence on people, and that she has supported them throughout there years that I would do the same. So during the Christmas season I decided to spend my much earned money from shoveling drive ways that I would go out and buy hams and turkeys and give them to needed people in the community. My mom has been a well-hearted woman, and she has taught me that making an influence in someone else's life, influences and sparks potential in your own life as well.
My mom has been a very influential and inspirational person in my life. She has become a big hero in my life as well. She has had a significant influence in my life because she has shown me the right path to take in life, and as I have been influenced to give back to others and assist needy people through her actions.
College Essay : Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you.
Help/Advice
I would Like some feedback and help on this college essay topic, I have a rough draft down below. Any comments, or advice would be great.
Thank You
Someone who has had significant Influence on me would be my mother Stacy Shimko because, she has shown me the right path to take in life, and through her giving back to the community, I have been influenced to give back to others and assist needy people through her actions.
One reason my mother has had a big influence on my life is because she has shown me the right path in life. As I have many hobbies and activities that I would like to pursue as a career or job, I have had many difficulties choosing what would be number one thing I should strive for now. When I tell her careers and jobs that I would like to pursue, she helps me set objectives for myself. She sets high standards to for myself as I should be performing everything I do at the best of my ability. My mother always gives me pointers onto what career plans I should take, and to always leave options open for myself as I can chase a career that is right for me. She drives me to connections and I make sure that a take the chance to always talk to adults that could help strive me for future success, as they often give me directions as to where I should go.
My second reason would be through my mother giving back to the community, influenced me to give back to others and assist needy people. My mom always was involved with church services and free lunches. I decided that I would go to help out one day, and after seeing that what my mom did had high influence on people, and that she has supported them throughout there years that I would do the same. So during the Christmas season I decided to spend my much earned money from shoveling drive ways that I would go out and buy hams and turkeys and give them to needed people in the community. My mom has been a well-hearted woman, and she has taught me that making an influence in someone else's life, influences and sparks potential in your own life as well.
My mom has been a very influential and inspirational person in my life. She has become a big hero in my life as well. She has had a significant influence in my life because she has shown me the right path to take in life, and as I have been influenced to give back to others and assist needy people through her actions.