Posts by marialuisadcl
Name: Maria Luisa Isabella Da Costa Lucena
Joined: Dec 26, 2015 |
Last Post: Dec 28, 2015
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From: Venezuela
School: Mater Dei School
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marialuisadcl Dec 26, 2015
Research Papers /
Form an opinion of Jane McGonigal's "Reality is Broken" [2]
I really liked your essay. Especially
A very common saying from parents to their children is...This paragraph is very well written and an image of what actually happened appears in front of the reader.
marialuisadcl Dec 26, 2015
Student Talk /
Hi everyone! Welcome at EssayForum thread. [414]
Courage Essay -Yale University- Can anyone help me?Hi! I'm an international student from Venezuela and I'm applying to some universities in the United States. I was wondering if you could help me with my essay. It might have some grammar mistakes. I would like to know your comments and recommendations.
I have a problem with my computer and I can't paste my essay on this forum. If you would like to help me, please contact me to my email
marialu_98 at
hotmail.comThank you in advance!
marialuisadcl Dec 27, 2015
Writing Feedback /
List the required readings from courses during the school year - grammar check [4]
Hi! I'm not sure if my answer has grammatical errors. Your help would be wondeful.
1. List the required readings from courses during the school yearMy favorite works from the Literature class this past year were: "Fictions" by Jorge Luis Borges; "One Hundred Years of Solitude" by Gabriel García Márquez (mostly because the author perfectly describes the incredible magic linking the everyday lives of the characters); "William Wilson" by Edgar Allan Poe (principally because the author conveys that one's sense of good and sense of evil are clear, and it is something that must be carried out for the remainder of our lives yet we all have two sides to our personality) and Divine Comedy" by Dante Alighieri
Thanks in advance
marialuisadcl Dec 27, 2015
Undergraduate /
Lancaster as a capital city / Why Franklin and Marshall? Answers for F&M Supplements [2]
I like your first answer, really good! But I'm not sure about the last part of your second answer
I understood how much the faculty care for the students. She told me that "the F&M faculty genuinely care about the students . I think here you are repeating the same idea.
Hope my comment helps!
Good luck on your application to F&M!
marialuisadcl Dec 28, 2015
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