milan1
Dec 30, 2015
Undergraduate / 3 days long international mathematical event - essay about my extracurricular activities/ experience [4]
Describe your work experience or extracurricular activities (1 or 2 paragraphs)
Please help me with grammar and give necessary feedback.
In my high school I got an opportunity to participate in 3 days long international mathematical event. I was given privilege to lead my team consisting 3 members. That was a new experience to me because I had been leading the team for the very first time in my life. In the competition, we were given sets of challenging, tricky and brain storming mathematical puzzles and our job was to solve them in limited time.
Each of the 3 days of the competition was an opportunity to learn. With a position of power comes responsibility and I learned about what it takes to be a leader, stand strong and determined. I learned taking obligation seriously by carrying out my leadership and constantly reminding my mates that we had to stay focused and work in collaboration. We developed time management skills and worked in team spirit to reach destination. The hard work and team spirit finally paid off and our team was able to bag silver accolade- my major achievement as a leader.
Describe your work experience or extracurricular activities (1 or 2 paragraphs)
Please help me with grammar and give necessary feedback.
In my high school I got an opportunity to participate in 3 days long international mathematical event. I was given privilege to lead my team consisting 3 members. That was a new experience to me because I had been leading the team for the very first time in my life. In the competition, we were given sets of challenging, tricky and brain storming mathematical puzzles and our job was to solve them in limited time.
Each of the 3 days of the competition was an opportunity to learn. With a position of power comes responsibility and I learned about what it takes to be a leader, stand strong and determined. I learned taking obligation seriously by carrying out my leadership and constantly reminding my mates that we had to stay focused and work in collaboration. We developed time management skills and worked in team spirit to reach destination. The hard work and team spirit finally paid off and our team was able to bag silver accolade- my major achievement as a leader.