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Posts by amimahmoud
Name: Ahmad Mahmoud
Joined: Jan 3, 2016
Last Post: Jan 3, 2016
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From: Egypt
School: Raid Language School

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amimahmoud   
Jan 3, 2016
Undergraduate / I need help with Stanford Essay What matters most to you? - Democracy [4]

Undoubtedly what matters to me most is democracy, because everybody deserves the right to be free and to choose their leaders, and this was what sparked the revolution of the 25 of January 2011 when the people united to topple a dictator who ruled Egypt for 30 years and his family and his party were controlling the whole country and exploiting its resources for their own benefit, and they were making sure that they will stay in power forever that in their last parliament elections President Mubarak's party won almost 97% of the seats in the parliament which was a surprise to everyone as they were not popular among the people which led everyone to suspicion about the integrity of the elections, and after that there were rumors that the president's son was willing to nominate himself for the upcoming presidential elections which he would have won for sure in the same matter. People were full with anger as they had seen the ruling party and their families getting richer and richer while the country's economy was collapsing and the poor were getting poorer. Police's only job was protecting the regime instead of protecting the people and freedom of speech was a thing we could only dream of. So I am infinitely overwhelmed with pride to say that I have contributed, emotionally and physically, in the acclaimed Egyptian Revolution. I dauntlessly marched, hand in hand, with multifarious Egyptians who audaciously risked their necks for the sake of their beloved country.
amimahmoud   
Jan 3, 2016
Undergraduate / I need help with Stanford Essay What matters most to you? - Democracy [4]

@vangiespen
What do you think of it now

Undoubtedly, what matters to me the most is freedom, because since I was a child I've lived in a community that doesn't permit freedom of expression whether at school or at a national level. Most people in our society consider expressing oneself to be rude and odd, although a person could express himself without being impolite or disrespectful. A few years ago, I unwillingly arrived to school 15 mins late and I was ordered to run around the school playground for about 30 minutes, which lead to me missing my first lesson. I asked to meet the school headmaster and told her about what happened to me, expecting that she would help or sympathize with me, but instead I was accused of being rude and defying school rules; that day I felt really oppressed and weak. On a national level, we lived in fear of the ruling regime which didn't allow freedom of speech and anyone who would express his dissatisfaction with the status quo would either disappear or get imprisoned. Thats why I am infinitely overwhelmed with pride to say that I have contributed, emotionally and physically, in the acclaimed Egyptian Revolution, 25th of January. I dauntlessly marched, hand in hand, with multifarious Egyptians who audaciously risked their necks for the sake of their beloved country, to topple off a dictator, looking forward to a change. Despite the fact that I was merely one amongst millions but I am sure I was one of the factors of the revolution's triumph.
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