dangmanhtruong
Feb 2, 2016
Writing Feedback / Blood sports - the cruel killings of helpless animals should be banned. To what extent do you agree? [5]
The question:
" Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. Blood sports should be banned.
To what extent to you agree or disagree?"
Here is my introduction:
"Today's society has become civilized and sophisticated, the complete opposite of our barbaric ancestors who kill animals for fun. Thus blood sports have been increasingly under attack because of its brutality and the killings of helpless animals. I believe that it is an uncivilized practice and that it should banned from society"
Is it ok? Thank you very much
The question:
" Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. Blood sports should be banned.
To what extent to you agree or disagree?"
Here is my introduction:
"Today's society has become civilized and sophisticated, the complete opposite of our barbaric ancestors who kill animals for fun. Thus blood sports have been increasingly under attack because of its brutality and the killings of helpless animals. I believe that it is an uncivilized practice and that it should banned from society"
Is it ok? Thank you very much