lynn
Aug 12, 2009
Letters / My cover letter (a dietary supplement company in Auckland) [9]
Hello everyone, i'm new here, so excited that i found this website to help with my writing. Please give me some suggestions and correct my grammar mistakes. Many many thanks.
I want to work in a dietary supplement company in Auckland, here is my cover letter:
Dear Human Resource Manager,
I am writing to you to express my interest in working for you in the analytical and testing field at Alpha laboratories (N.Z) Ltd.
Alpha has appealed to me as a leading dietary supplements manufacturer in New Zealand. The superior reputation and the achievement of your company mean that it would be a great honour to join your team in Auckland. As a highly motivated person i am eager to work in food and nutraceutical industry as my long term career.
I completed a degree of Bachelor of Science in Human Nutrition with Minor in Food Science at the end of 2008. During my study, i have developed excellent laboratory skills and a great interest in working in laboratory. I have also made relentless efforts to be self-motivated by taking on a variety of part time jobs. My oral communication, interpersonal and time management skills have been consistently improving through working as a cashier, waitress, and housekeeper. I am confident to work and able to work under pressure.
Form talking to people who have begun the food laboratory work, i am very aware that i have a lot to learn as i start my career. However i believe that with my passion, my strong interpersonal, technical laboratory skills and my ambition, i can make a significant contribution to the firm in this role. I will be available for an interview to discuss this position further and to answer any questions that you might have.
Yours sincerely,
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Hello everyone, i'm new here, so excited that i found this website to help with my writing. Please give me some suggestions and correct my grammar mistakes. Many many thanks.
I want to work in a dietary supplement company in Auckland, here is my cover letter:
Dear Human Resource Manager,
I am writing to you to express my interest in working for you in the analytical and testing field at Alpha laboratories (N.Z) Ltd.
Alpha has appealed to me as a leading dietary supplements manufacturer in New Zealand. The superior reputation and the achievement of your company mean that it would be a great honour to join your team in Auckland. As a highly motivated person i am eager to work in food and nutraceutical industry as my long term career.
I completed a degree of Bachelor of Science in Human Nutrition with Minor in Food Science at the end of 2008. During my study, i have developed excellent laboratory skills and a great interest in working in laboratory. I have also made relentless efforts to be self-motivated by taking on a variety of part time jobs. My oral communication, interpersonal and time management skills have been consistently improving through working as a cashier, waitress, and housekeeper. I am confident to work and able to work under pressure.
Form talking to people who have begun the food laboratory work, i am very aware that i have a lot to learn as i start my career. However i believe that with my passion, my strong interpersonal, technical laboratory skills and my ambition, i can make a significant contribution to the firm in this role. I will be available for an interview to discuss this position further and to answer any questions that you might have.
Yours sincerely,
...
