Posts by maxinemiu

maxinemiu

Sep 2, 2016

Undergraduate / Georgia Tech undergraduate application prompt. Apply for chemical engineering [7]

Beyond rankings, location, and athletics, why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech? (max 150 words)
The challenging schoolwork at Georgia Tech attracts me. Instead of simply "getting out", I desire to propose comprehensive plans to accomplish difficult tasks. I would enjoy solving hard problems with Georgia Tech fellows in Clough Commons. After brainstorming, I can relax by swimming in the CRC or watching an FBS football game.

Georgia Tech can satisfy my passion for chemical engineering. In the ChBE school, I can immerse myself in the scientific world and further my knowledge through hands-on research. I can collaborate with outstanding professors and students alike in OXE and Tau Beta Pi organizations.

Georgia Tech can help me become a capable researcher. The ChBE School will allow me to explore pharmaceutics and biotechnology. I look forward to developing improvements to modern medicine through great teamwork in the widely acclaimed research program.

I seem to hear George P. Burdell shouting at me: "Go my Yellow Jacket. Think big and solve big!"

Can anyone help me look at this short essay? Thank you !!!

maxinemiu

Sep 4, 2016

Undergraduate / Georgia Tech undergraduate application prompt. Apply for chemical engineering [7]

Hello Stanford fellow! Thank you so much! Your advice really helps !! ^^^

I will try to make the essay more specific ^^

I have a small question. For "getting out", that seems kinda like a GT jargon: Graduates say "getting out" because GT's school work is very heavy.

Do you think I should change this?

Thx :D

maxinemiu

Sep 5, 2016

Undergraduate / Georgia Tech undergraduate application prompt. Apply for chemical engineering [7]

Hi~ Thanks for the amazing comments and suggestions! I feel ashamed lol >< Even u applied GT long long ago n you still know GT much better than me !

I change some your suggestions cuz the word limits ;V;

Here is the new one:

The academic environment and curriculum at Georgia Tech fascinate me. Instead of simply "getting out", I desire to take full advantage of the fascinating programs and coursework in the ChBE school.

The ChBE school at Georgia Tech can stroke my passion for chemical engineering with its special courses and cutting-edge research. I can learn the integrated bioprocesses of biotech industries in the Bioprocess Engineering Course and explore prototypes with real world applications in Capstone Design Course. I can share my research with school fellows and gain valuable experience in Spring Symposium. I can also collaborate with outstanding professors and students in the laboratory. I want to join the research team who developed new membranes to significantly reduce manufacturing energy. I look forward to developing improvements to industrial scale through hands-on research.

I seem to hear George P. Burdell shouting at me: "Go my Yellow Jacket. Think big and solve big!"