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Name: Samuel Trnka
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Samuel22122001   
Nov 4, 2016
Writing Feedback / DESCRIPTION OF A PERSON - he is my friend and his dream is to become a professional gamer [2]

I would be really grateful if you could correct it thanks

DESCRIPTION OF A PERSON

I have a friend named Baran he is 14 years old and we know us since we were 1-year-old.
He is about 1.70m tall and 65 kg heavy. Baran has an oval face and big brown eyes. His mouth is big but his lips are small and his hair is brown and short but when it's to log it became curly. He is very normal. Baran always wear t-shirts and jeans. When he meets someone the first time he is very shy but when he knows someone better he is really funny and then he has a big mouth. His dream is to become a professional Gamer because of this he plays a lot and when I say a lot then I mean really a looooot. He isn't very active, he loves to sit somewhere and play videogames or watch people who play videogames. He's a good friend because he has always time for his friends and when you motivate him he can be really active too. I'm happy to have a friend like him and I hope our friendship still hold very long.

thx for all answers
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