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Posts by Eiraj [Suspended]
Name: Asmawati R
Joined: Nov 14, 2016
Last Post: Nov 14, 2016
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From: Indonesia
School: English Studio

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Eiraj   
Nov 14, 2016
Writing Feedback / English is used as a second language in some countries [3]

TED-11 Summary: The World's English Mania

Jay Walker, one of the TED-Talk speakers, Jay Walker, delivered a topic about "The World's English Mania". He said English as international language or being second language in some countries in this globe is already learned from early age in many years. In the past, several media were available that people can be easily studying English throughout being fans of international football club or fans of the band from English-speaking country such England. Take one example, The Beatles at that time had a huge number of admirers who were really fanatic to this phenomenal band worldwide before 21th century, in which they were able to learn about English from the song lyrics. Contrarily, after years the citizens of the world, such as Southeast of Asia, China, and the others, found the new media. One of the ways was by screaming together, particularly in China, repeating after the instructor saying some words or sentences in the large area either indoor building or outdoor building, and this country has been the largest English-speaking country in the world. In short, English is really having many benefits for the non-English countries to broaden their knowledge about worldwide issues, and also being a problem-solving way.
Eiraj   
Nov 14, 2016
Writing Feedback / Article Summary about Christine Corbett Moran [3]

Hi @Dioba,

Here some corrections on your article summary:

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... as a busy person , busy enough person to go to Mars.

I hope those corrections are useful for your following summary or essay :)
Eiraj   
Nov 14, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary TED - An engineer's vision for tinty forests, everywhere [3]

Hi @Abrahamlincoln,

Here some corrections for your summary:

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... industrial engineering, is having a passion for findingto find out a solution for ...
..., he joined the voluntoryvoluntary project which (...) met with prof.Prof. Okazaki who ...
... positive impacts are , increasing the quality ...
Therefore, he provides website that consists of information ...

I hope those corrections are useful for your following summary or essay :)
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