Demieymaj
Nov 25, 2016
Undergraduate / WHY BOSTON UNIVERSITY? my passion for biology and experience living in a 3rd world nation [2]
My essay is 330 words meaning it is 80 words over the limit. Is there any way the essay can be improved and shortened without losing substance. I would really appreciate whatever help I can get.
Boston university
In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission.
Going to high school in a third world nation left me without many options; I grew fond of biological science but had no pathway explore my passions as extensively as I would have preferred. With little to no access to research work and wider learning, I was unable to find a niche within the biological sciences, and to possess the broad understanding of the subject I so deeply desired. It is my strong belief that the biological science department of BU will provide me with an in-depth understanding of my intended major while allowing me to study in an environment that is both academically challenging and fulfilling. The availability of a breadth of biology specialisation mayors will allow to me, the option to find a specialisation of particular interest to me in the biological sciences and dig deeper. I hope to immerse myself in research opportunities in a range of biology disciplines-the Ecuador tropical ecology program being of particular interest; Thereby, allowing myself to receive a truly multi-dimensional learning experience and accumulate the skills needed to progress onto postgraduate study.
However, I seek more than solely intellectual growth, rather, I desire an all round learning experience in an environment where I can be free from all limitations. Housing representatives of over a 100 countries, there is no doubt that at BU I will be exposed to thought-provoking interactions with individuals whose perspectives do not coincide with mine. These differing perspectives will help to shape me into the truly global citizen I aspire to be. I look to engaging in a wide range of organisational work, such the ASB program, during my stay at BU so that I may continue the legacy of contributing to the society that I started in my high school career.With Boston University's culturally rich setting, diversity, and all round excellence I know that in four years I will come out fully equipped with the skills and mindset needed to progress in my career path and future.
My essay is 330 words meaning it is 80 words over the limit. Is there any way the essay can be improved and shortened without losing substance. I would really appreciate whatever help I can get.
Boston university
In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission.
Going to high school in a third world nation left me without many options; I grew fond of biological science but had no pathway explore my passions as extensively as I would have preferred. With little to no access to research work and wider learning, I was unable to find a niche within the biological sciences, and to possess the broad understanding of the subject I so deeply desired. It is my strong belief that the biological science department of BU will provide me with an in-depth understanding of my intended major while allowing me to study in an environment that is both academically challenging and fulfilling. The availability of a breadth of biology specialisation mayors will allow to me, the option to find a specialisation of particular interest to me in the biological sciences and dig deeper. I hope to immerse myself in research opportunities in a range of biology disciplines-the Ecuador tropical ecology program being of particular interest; Thereby, allowing myself to receive a truly multi-dimensional learning experience and accumulate the skills needed to progress onto postgraduate study.
However, I seek more than solely intellectual growth, rather, I desire an all round learning experience in an environment where I can be free from all limitations. Housing representatives of over a 100 countries, there is no doubt that at BU I will be exposed to thought-provoking interactions with individuals whose perspectives do not coincide with mine. These differing perspectives will help to shape me into the truly global citizen I aspire to be. I look to engaging in a wide range of organisational work, such the ASB program, during my stay at BU so that I may continue the legacy of contributing to the society that I started in my high school career.With Boston University's culturally rich setting, diversity, and all round excellence I know that in four years I will come out fully equipped with the skills and mindset needed to progress in my career path and future.
