ahmed hawila
Dec 31, 2016
Undergraduate / An essay that shows why I am going to be a great participant for the UGRAD scholarship [4]
@Holt
thanks a lot for your feedback . i would like to say it is not disappointing at all because yesterday i read some of your comments to other colleges here and totally edited the essay . so it will be nice of you if you read the new one tonight before 11:59 PM and thanks in advance
For me, a great participant is an active productive one who always seeks to reach his goals and does not let a moment in his life pass without learning something new. One should be always in a state of sharing and improvement.
That is what I always feel in my life, this what made me so enthusiastic to participate in UGRAD scholarship when I heard about it and knew the benefits told by past alumina.
Cultural exchange and sharing knowledge are very important for the entire humanity; this is what I believe in. The ethnic diversity among our university student made me full of interest to get involved into the Non-Egyptian cultures. Malaysian students in our college are as many as Syrians and other Arabian students, they share us their food, habits and even language or accents as we also make them get involved into ours. It is a great thing to have many friends other than Egyptians.
Fortunately, I had the opportunity to travel to Sudan in an exchange program organized by Arabian Universities Association; it was a great experience where I could make friends of students and doctors. The different travel conditions and people gave me a lot of experience to depend on myself and to deal with the difficult situations I had. There, we met students from turkey, Pakistan, Jordan and Saudi Arabia and we had time to share some of our cultures and traditions.
I think I am of a good degree of cultural exchange experiences which makes me hopeful to be an effective part in this scholarship as an ambassador of Egypt right there in USA and share my culture and knowledge about my home country with other colleges. Also knowing new doctors and students from all over the world is going to add to my experience and personality.
One's personality should be special and of a good impact on others. From this belief, I went through my community full of love and intention to be a positive person. I gave a hand with some of the NGOs in Egypt to help people in need financially and in other aspects. I think we are going to be able to participate in community services in USA and this of course will strengthen my volunteer skills.
Even I seek the same principle with my colleges. These volunteer activities helped me improve mu communication and leadership skills until being the leader of Resala medical convoys' team. These skills, for sure, will be developed when I get involved into the events of UGRAD.
My community has many medical problems as just any community does, especially concerning Non-Communicable diseases. My turn as a medical student and future doctor is to move forwards against these problems through being highly skillful in medical subjects and research skills. I have already taken my first steps in the medi cal research and actually I think UGRAD is going to enrich my medical knowledge and strengthen my research skills to be a good researcher. I have a dream to effective in this field and to achieve good results not only for the good of my community but the entire world.
This is why I think UGRAD is going to be great for me and I am going to be great participant for UGRAD.
@Holt
thanks a lot for your feedback . i would like to say it is not disappointing at all because yesterday i read some of your comments to other colleges here and totally edited the essay . so it will be nice of you if you read the new one tonight before 11:59 PM and thanks in advance
For me, a great participant is an active productive one who always seeks to reach his goals and does not let a moment in his life pass without learning something new. One should be always in a state of sharing and improvement.
That is what I always feel in my life, this what made me so enthusiastic to participate in UGRAD scholarship when I heard about it and knew the benefits told by past alumina.
Cultural exchange and sharing knowledge are very important for the entire humanity; this is what I believe in. The ethnic diversity among our university student made me full of interest to get involved into the Non-Egyptian cultures. Malaysian students in our college are as many as Syrians and other Arabian students, they share us their food, habits and even language or accents as we also make them get involved into ours. It is a great thing to have many friends other than Egyptians.
Fortunately, I had the opportunity to travel to Sudan in an exchange program organized by Arabian Universities Association; it was a great experience where I could make friends of students and doctors. The different travel conditions and people gave me a lot of experience to depend on myself and to deal with the difficult situations I had. There, we met students from turkey, Pakistan, Jordan and Saudi Arabia and we had time to share some of our cultures and traditions.
I think I am of a good degree of cultural exchange experiences which makes me hopeful to be an effective part in this scholarship as an ambassador of Egypt right there in USA and share my culture and knowledge about my home country with other colleges. Also knowing new doctors and students from all over the world is going to add to my experience and personality.
One's personality should be special and of a good impact on others. From this belief, I went through my community full of love and intention to be a positive person. I gave a hand with some of the NGOs in Egypt to help people in need financially and in other aspects. I think we are going to be able to participate in community services in USA and this of course will strengthen my volunteer skills.
Even I seek the same principle with my colleges. These volunteer activities helped me improve mu communication and leadership skills until being the leader of Resala medical convoys' team. These skills, for sure, will be developed when I get involved into the events of UGRAD.
My community has many medical problems as just any community does, especially concerning Non-Communicable diseases. My turn as a medical student and future doctor is to move forwards against these problems through being highly skillful in medical subjects and research skills. I have already taken my first steps in the medi cal research and actually I think UGRAD is going to enrich my medical knowledge and strengthen my research skills to be a good researcher. I have a dream to effective in this field and to achieve good results not only for the good of my community but the entire world.
This is why I think UGRAD is going to be great for me and I am going to be great participant for UGRAD.